Another Poem.

My Confession --

I've been finding it funny lately, how the past has faded away
Everything that has faded, has suddenly been replaced
I've been up and down lately, trying to find my way out
I'm so sick and tired of thinking you'll come around

I guess I shouldn't try to forget what I learned
I've found out that reactions speak louder than words
Running around in circles, I've gotten lost in the confusion
Maybe the sparkle in your eye was just a mere illusion

You don't need to save me, just save me from myself
Because I can't find myself happy with anyone else
So, raise your glass and make an apology
It's not like you really need to hate me

I've said it before, somehow I can't let you go
But it seems as if you've got everything under control
I don't know how to tell you this but everything leads to you
And now my heart is screaming "What the hell am I going to do?"

I've been finding it funny lately, how the past has faded away..
Everything that has faded, has suddenly been replaced
Running around in circles, I've gotten lost in the confusion
Maybe the sparkle in your eye was just a mere illusion

It sounded quite simple, but in a good way, overall I liked it!
Love the last line, +rep!

Yes very from the heart! Well done:) +rep

This is a really good poem
Well done :)

Thanks guys. :] Glad you liked it. I personally love this poem.
I have a few I like but this one really just makes me feel good.
Whenever I read this I smile and light up.

Thats really nice x

Ohhh my goshhh that is the most amazingest poem i have ever read! +Rep !

It's good but it sounds more like a lyrics from a song. I don't know why it just seems like it. Really good though :-)

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Originally Posted by Narnat,

Ohhh my goshhh that is the most amazingest poem i have ever read! +Rep !

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amazingest? lolol

I love the poem, very nice. How long did it take you to make? Or was it just a spur of the moment thing?

I really like it, better than the last one you posted, but I like a tiny bit more rhyming in a poem ;) +rep anyway ;)

This poem was a little bit of both.
I knew what kind of poem I was going to write. And I knew what it was about.
It was trying to find the words to put onto paper that was the hard part.

This poem took me about 2 months to finish. Maybe a month and a half.