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Thread: Another Poem.

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    Default Another Poem.

    My Confession --

    I've been finding it funny lately, how the past has faded away
    Everything that has faded, has suddenly been replaced
    I've been up and down lately, trying to find my way out
    I'm so sick and tired of thinking you'll come around

    I guess I shouldn't try to forget what I learned
    I've found out that reactions speak louder than words
    Running around in circles, I've gotten lost in the confusion
    Maybe the sparkle in your eye was just a mere illusion

    You don't need to save me, just save me from myself
    Because I can't find myself happy with anyone else
    So, raise your glass and make an apology
    It's not like you really need to hate me

    I've said it before, somehow I can't let you go
    But it seems as if you've got everything under control
    I don't know how to tell you this but everything leads to you
    And now my heart is screaming "What the hell am I going to do?"

    I've been finding it funny lately, how the past has faded away..
    Everything that has faded, has suddenly been replaced
    Running around in circles, I've gotten lost in the confusion
    Maybe the sparkle in your eye was just a mere illusion


    Don’t be humble. You’re not that great.

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    It sounded quite simple, but in a good way, overall I liked it!
    Love the last line, +rep!


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    Yes very from the heart! Well done +rep

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    This is a really good poem
    Well done

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    Thanks guys. :] Glad you liked it. I personally love this poem.
    I have a few I like but this one really just makes me feel good.
    Whenever I read this I smile and light up.


    Don’t be humble. You’re not that great.

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    Thats really nice x

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    Ohhh my goshhh that is the most amazingest poem i have ever read! +Rep !




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    It's good but it sounds more like a lyrics from a song. I don't know why it just seems like it. Really good though :-)

    x brandon x

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    Quote Originally Posted by Narnat, View Post
    Ohhh my goshhh that is the most amazingest poem i have ever read! +Rep !
    amazingest? lolol

    I love the poem, very nice. How long did it take you to make? Or was it just a spur of the moment thing?


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    I really like it, better than the last one you posted, but I like a tiny bit more rhyming in a poem +rep anyway


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