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Made on MS Paint. Slate/Rate? :P
Only constructive criticism, please. :)
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http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s...exibeast-2.png
Made on MS Paint. Slate/Rate? :P
Only constructive criticism, please. :)
Not really an enlargement as such as you have used your own ideas with it - but it does make a change from the boring ones I must admit.
Maybe the right elbow joint is just a bit too pointed? But overall it's a good piece.
This is over 9000 times better than those chibi things.
Pretty cool, never seen one like this before. +rep
They look similar to the ones that French guy posted.
Proportions don't seem quite right on the hair for some reason, think it needs to be more domed and a touch taller to fit with the face being more oval than spherical. Other than that it looks great, and definitely a nicer style than the chibis and normal enlargements
Meaning what? And thanks for the CC everyone. I really appreciate it!Quote:
Originally Posted by Describe
I would have said what it really meant had it meant anything else.Quote:
Originally Posted by AppleChapstick.
It's pretty awful imo. The shading is hard to see everywhere except the trousers, some things have black outlines and some dont, stick with one. The outline is dodgy is some areas and the face in general isnt great. Oh also, dont put "made in paint" in the title, most people use paint and its nothing special as such.
Okay, Sorry. I thought you might be suggesting something. =]Quote:
Originally Posted by Describe
Which part of 'constructive' did you not get?Quote:
Originally Posted by dbgtz
its good, i just would like to see more colors.
Well it looks good to me. I like the laidback style of the charactor especially. Not that I am any good at graphics. Well done. Also if you want to say 'Made in Paint' you have every right to do so as far as I am conncerned. :)
Constructive criticism doesn't just mean "DON'T SAY ANYTHING WRONG WITH IT OR I'LL CRY", it means simply not saying "it's crap" and leaving it at that. Although I don't agree with all of the things he said (for example I think the light shading works well for a lot of it rather than using darker shadows) his criticism was constructive as he let you know exactly what he disliked about itQuote:
Originally Posted by AppleChapstick.
Like FlyingJesus said, it is constructive. If it wasn't he could have said 'it's rubbish' or 'omg it's so amazgin best i've ever seen. - But that wouldn't help you improve next time.Quote:
Originally Posted by AppleChapstick.
I do agree about the black lines aren't consistent all the way round which looks a bit odd.
I think that was very constructive on the first page...
It's okay I suppose, but I don't love it. The face it a bit not normal?
It's okay, not like anything I've seen before, it's different and I like it :)
I didn't actually choose the colours, it was my friends habbo.Quote:
Originally Posted by Stihl
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Originally Posted by Catzsy
I s'pose. It was said in a bit of a hard way though and his last comment was uncalled for.Quote:
Originally Posted by FlyingJesus
I actually like it like that but I'll try one with all black, see how it looks.Quote:
Originally Posted by Samanfa
Yeah, It does look a bit off. I can't tell what it is though, haha.Quote:
Originally Posted by ShazLouise
Thanks. =]Quote:
Originally Posted by ChickenFaces
No it wasn't, people doing alts and graphics in paint is nothing special, the majority of people use it.Quote:
Originally Posted by AppleChapstick.
Also if anything, I'm the only one who posts criticism (not saying other people dont), but alot of people just leave utterly crap replies which aid towards nothing.
I didn't say it was anything special I was just mentioning it because lots of people ask me what I make things on.Quote:
Originally Posted by dbgtz
Pretty nice :) But you need to decide whether you're having black lines inside the 'outline' or not, you have random parts where there are black lines and parts which aren't? Like the nose + on his right leg there's half a black line :PQuote:
Originally Posted by AppleChapstick.
Also, on the hair I think the shading should be a bit more defined to stop it looking flat :)
Otherwise it's nice, a lot different to the other types of enlargements.
It is true you do post criticism and you do know what you are talking about but what you have to remember is that this is a habbo forum not a professional graphics forum and any member is entitled to a view whether they are proficient in graphics or not. Of course if you feel they are 'crap' then that's your opinion too but doesn't help other members respect your opinions either most of which are pretty valid.Quote:
Originally Posted by dbgtz
The member concerned is probably on the harsher side of constructive criticism so I would take all the views in balance and not just concentrate on this one. He does give good advice.Quote:
Originally Posted by AppleChapstick.
Could we concentrate on the actual graphic now please as it is starting to get a bit argumentative?
That's really nice , maybe u can work on the right foot
+rep :)
Very nice, keep it up.
+Rep
I don't really like it, the face is weird, like it doesn't have a neck, and you should have been more consistent with outlining it all black, looks a bit daft how some of it isn't outlined and some of it is.
try making his chin and stuff smaller so the head looks more normal;)
It's pretty nice but could do with a better skin colour/outline :)
You should use darker shades of shading cause it looks kind of flat atm.
wow very nice if its with paint :)
Yeh, dnno why. The hair doesnt look right.
Maybe try editing that..
I think this is pretty cool. Better than something I could do.
pretty shakey, and i think it's supposed to be a female, but the nose makes it look male.
good idea though. :)
hah, when I first saw it, it made me chuckle I actually do really like it. It isn't something you see being posted a lot so +rep for being unique. I think I'd quite like to see some more from you!
looks pretty good :)
although it could be improved
Seeing as it was done on paint, I think it is really good.
Something new. I like it
I think it looks really good i specifically like the lower part of the body
Bit different... not bad :)
I really like that :)
That is excellent, you have serious talent with gfx. Well done!
Wow! What a wonderful enlargement! I suppose it doesn't count as an enlargement - but its similar. Well done - Brilliant! +rep when I can.