Made on MS Paint. Slate/Rate?
Only constructive criticism, please.![]()

Made on MS Paint. Slate/Rate?
Only constructive criticism, please.![]()
Not really an enlargement as such as you have used your own ideas with it - but it does make a change from the boring ones I must admit.
Maybe the right elbow joint is just a bit too pointed? But overall it's a good piece.
Pretty cool, never seen one like this before. +rep
Bonjour, la noirceur, mon vieil ami
Je suis venu te reparler
Car une vision piétinante doucement
A laissé ses graines lorsque je dormais
Et la vision
Qui était plantée dans mon cerveau
Demeure toujours
Parmi le son du silence
They look similar to the ones that French guy posted.
Proportions don't seem quite right on the hair for some reason, think it needs to be more domed and a touch taller to fit with the face being more oval than spherical. Other than that it looks great, and definitely a nicer style than the chibis and normal enlargements
It's pretty awful imo. The shading is hard to see everywhere except the trousers, some things have black outlines and some dont, stick with one. The outline is dodgy is some areas and the face in general isnt great. Oh also, dont put "made in paint" in the title, most people use paint and its nothing special as such.
Last edited by dbgtz; 25-11-2010 at 04:14 PM.
Okay, Sorry. I thought you might be suggesting something. =]
Which part of 'constructive' did you not get?It's pretty awful imo. The shading is hard to see everywhere except the trousers, some things have black outlines and some dont, stick with one. The outline is dodgy is some areas and the face in general isnt great. Oh also, dont put "made in paint" in the title, most people use paint and its nothing special as such.
Last edited by AppleChapstick.; 25-11-2010 at 05:05 PM.
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