2nd alt - Mode bunk bed :)

[Papershop]

Seen it on the forum, and wanted to try and make it myself. Rate and cc please..

[Casanova]

I don't like it, as most bunk bed's are single beds.

6/10 for the attempt!
also, it's unoriginal but still i guess it's better than the other guy's!

[Papershop]

Thanks Anyways, It was only my second alt. i want to improve my skills first before i come up with something original

[Goofy]

i would be affraid to crawl up that thin metal latter? .. it's probably razor sharp

and i would'nt feel safe at the bottom bed, because of the thing that is holding the second one up, is so thin?

7/10 anyways

[Black_Parade]

Good alt but the ladder looks thin .




8/10 + rep for the attempt

[hit-by-a-car]

BLEEDING COPY CAT

micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): Please stay on topic. Give some C&C and/or rate the alt.

[PigsNose]

He was just trying to do it for himself. Hit-by-a-car - try and see what he has improved on etc.
On topic: It's okay, but needs better shading and the ladder isn't touching the floor. Well done for your second alt 7/10

[Papershop]

Thanks guys, oops yea, didnt realise how thin it was, here an updated version...

[hit-by-a-car]

mate, just put staples in ur legs and make sure there dead befoure they climbe up that thing! 5/10 nice try v nice.

[micky.blue.eyes]

Thanks guys, oops yea, didnt realise how thin it was, here an updated version...

Not bad, looks much better now.
I think you should make the piece of metal supporting the top bed at the head part of the bed, so habbos have more space to get in bed.
The shading is a bit odd, but I'll blame Sulake for that.
7/10