A heart lost and gone. (STORY)

[Emicat]

write more you little rat

Is there any need for that?

The start of the story is on the first page - if you want to read that... or call me some sort of vermin again...

[Frank459]

i did read it and my comment was meant to mean - write more Its great!
there was no need to get upset

[Addie]

Hey thats good BUt too short.

[kasi]

write more pleasee.

[Emicat]

"I think Jack is dead" She mumered - so upset to show any emotion.
"Come here" Tom welcomed her into his arms. He kissed her forehead gently.
"I love you so much" Lisa cried. She stopped hugging opened the box. There were photos and CD's. She picked up a photo. Nothing could had prepared her for what was on it.

It was her. She was in her bedroom. Sleeping.

[Addie]

; Can you do longer?

[Embean]

I need moreeee.

[Emicat]

I didn't realise so many people like my story... ! Anyway...

Her hand shook as she picked up the photo. There was others. There was a picture of her sitting with Jess. There was a photo of Jess crying with a gun to her head. Lisa moved her thumb. Jess was holding a gun - Jess tried to shoot them.
"Ohh my gooood.." Lisa pasted out. She woke up in Jess' car. Tom was sitting next to her - with a horrified look on his face. "Whats wrong hun?" Lisa held his hand - his eyes were watering. "Tom-" Thats when Lisa heard the CD.
""Hiya Jess how has your day been?""OK - yours?"" Jack had bugged her phone line.

[Cass.]

nooo write more

[Emicat]

Tom had played the CD on the CD player. The box was in the backseat. Tom's eyes were watering and sparkling in the moonlight. Lisa had never seen her boyfriend cry. Well, apart from the Monster wegie in Year 8.
"Lisa whats going on" Tom sighed with a tear sliding down his cheek.
"I don't know Tom - I have no idea" Lisa hugged Tom. He buried his face in her ripped shirt. "I think we should go somewhere safe - but I think Jess will be okay yet we need to take her with us." Lisa whispered. Tom nodded his head. He got out the car and picked her up. He lay her in the backseat. "I can't drive." Tom gulped. "I should think not - you are 16!" Lisa smiled. Tom smiled back and started the car. They drove to Lisa's house. Her living room window was smashed and Zero was whimpering behind a chair. Lisa pushed the front door open and her dog jumped out at her. She picked him up and stroked his head. Tom joinned in the hug. They were safe at last. Lisa put her dog down and he went and played with a toy. Tom held Lisa's waist and kissed her neck. "Tom you nearly died! How can you be in the mood for making out?!?" Lisa exclaimed. "Because I love you. Thats why" Tom mubled inbetween kisses. Lisa giggled and went into her kitchen and Tom cotinued kissing her neck from behind. She grabbed a bottle of Lamberine and downed half. Lisa got drunk very easily. Tom drunk the rest yet he got drunk easily too. The next thing she knew she woke up. In bed with a naked Tom.