9/11 Peom I wrote. From my heart

[whitehomey]

what a horror..Imagein in your were in that building buring hot with temperatures reaching 120F, smoke and debris everywhere, trying to climb down 100 floors to saftey and whats worse is when your climbing down a flight of stairs, and the building shakes, starts caving in, collapsing, getting crushed of hundred of pounds of steel.

basicaly you would be dead before you knew what was hepening

also I was a few blocks from WTC when the planes hit :S

[Hopeless]

well thats wrong


because people went down 40 floors after it got hit..

so they knew what was happening

[whitehomey]

well thats wrong


because people went down 40 floors after it got hit..

so they knew what was happening

they wudnt know the building was collapsing there would just be rumbline an stuff. only we know iot was colapsing cos we saw it :eusa_wall:eusa_wall

[Hopeless]

Well thats half true


because when the first building collapsed they knew the second one was going to aswell

So as i say

half of them knew because the othertower was still up

[arouse]

very meaningful, well done.

[brandon]

Great poem.

[pepperoni nipz]

no offence, but most of it doesn't really make sense :s

[Tanya]

aww bless

[FlyingJesus]

Some of it did seem to just be like.. whatever rhymed went.. so from a poetic view it isn't fantastically written, but nice subject.

[-Undiscovered]

nice poem well done