Dubble Dispenser

[[Chris]]

You hump the machine and the bar comes out.

lmao its good 10/10

[brodeo]

Thanks Mr.Chris

[Juicette]

It's good. Weird but good. 10/10.

[Juicette]

Sorry about double posting. But I found the same alt on this site. Or is it you? http://www.zhabbo.com/showthread.php?t=139

[iAdam]

Another great alt, 10/10.

[brodeo]

Thanks DJ-Simpson



Catzsy (Forum Super Moderator) Please do not bump threads 4 months old.

[Tiked]

10/10 Cheep.

Brilliant Work

I loved the HXTV Studios aswell Brilliant

+ Rep

[Xero]

Just some simple criticism for now. The main problem you have is angles, the two sides just don't meet properly. I made a quick edit to show you what I mean.. It wouldn't have to be exactly like this (e.g. the bump may be removed on the reverse side) but yours would still be out of whack.



Get rid of the black lines, black lines ruin things like this. Black lines should be replaced with darker colours than the midtones, unless between two very similar colours, AND on a protruding edge (an edge that comes OUT at us, in that case it would be a lighter colour). I've also shown this in the above edit, just did it very quickly to the little drops of chocolate on the side for you =)

Your light source seems to be from the left, yet the part where the chocolate or whatever comes out is lit very brightly (the bottom)? I'd suggest making that darker, or atleast adding a shadow. Also, the coin slot seems to be lit from the opposite side, simply flipping it would make it viable.

The amchine only says "DUBBL" not "DUBBLE", dunno whether this was a creative choice or what, but i'd suggest redoing it so that they go vertically down the machine (make sure not they are not totally parralel as there are bumps in the machine) and also making them 3dish.

The shadows on the chocolate part signify that it flattens down into the blue, yet some places below in the blue it also has shadows, which says there is something sticking out, they conflict. Remove one or the other.

That'll do for now. I'll give some criticism on your log bench later If I have time =)

[VersionUpdate]

that is fantastic u r doing really well lately 9/10 theres a small error +rep tho

[brodeo]

Just some simple criticism for now. The main problem you have is angles, the two sides just don't meet properly. I made a quick edit to show you what I mean.. It wouldn't have to be exactly like this (e.g. the bump may be removed on the reverse side) but yours would still be out of whack.



Get rid of the black lines, black lines ruin things like this. Black lines should be replaced with darker colours than the midtones, unless between two very similar colours, AND on a protruding edge (an edge that comes OUT at us, in that case it would be a lighter colour). I've also shown this in the above edit, just did it very quickly to the little drops of chocolate on the side for you =)

Your light source seems to be from the left, yet the part where the chocolate or whatever comes out is lit very brightly (the bottom)? I'd suggest making that darker, or atleast adding a shadow. Also, the coin slot seems to be lit from the opposite side, simply flipping it would make it viable.

The amchine only says "DUBBL" not "DUBBLE", dunno whether this was a creative choice or what, but i'd suggest redoing it so that they go vertically down the machine (make sure not they are not totally parralel as there are bumps in the machine) and also making them 3dish.

The shadows on the chocolate part signify that it flattens down into the blue, yet some places below in the blue it also has shadows, which says there is something sticking out, they conflict. Remove one or the other.

That'll do for now. I'll give some criticism on your log bench later If I have time =)

Ya, most of that i edited for my Habbo Football alt entry, but unfrotuneately i can't find it in my files