Bobba Motel

[brodeo]

And if you've seen it on habbos.net i am Swosh. You can ask, i am.

Edited by ReviewDude (Forum Moderator): Image changed at the request of thread starter.

[Mario]

good but the heart on the sign needs to be more iso.

[Browney]

Love the idea, the canyon bit at the back I really like. Just 2 shadows are missing and that's from the sign and from the motel. I adore the caravans.

I've highlighted some objects that have conflicting light sources. Like the shadows.



Other than those little things, I really like it. 9/10

[Bibling]

And if you've seen it on habbos.net i am Swosh. You can ask, i am.

Very nice. I rate 9.9/10, slight errors on the caravans though, try to make the lines straighter on ther caravans hook, Bibling. x See if you can edit that, and Post it back to me with that final result, I might C+C after..x

[Zuar]

it doesn't look that much habboish..
shading is abit .. as above said,
but good, 9/10

[scubadiva]

The one thing that really stood out for me was that the heart on the sign wasn't isometric, or is that deliberate?

Well done to noticing the conflicting light sources, I don't think I'd have spotted that tbh

[brodeo]

The one thing that really stood out for me was that the heart on the sign wasn't isometric, or is that deliberate?

Well done to noticing the conflicting light sources, I don't think I'd have spotted that tbh

Yeh, intended.

Love the idea, the canyon bit at the back I really like. Just 2 shadows are missing and that's from the sign and from the motel. I adore the caravans.

I've highlighted some objects that have conflicting light sources. Like the shadows.



Other than those little things, I really like it. 9/10

Thankyou very much, i'll get right to it.

Better?


If a mod could edit my original post i'd be thankful.

[Browney]

Better?


If a mod could edit my original post i'd be thankful.

Great! 9/10 +Rep. when possible.

[brodeo]

Thanks adam.

[Browney]

No problem.