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    Quote Originally Posted by RichardKnox View Post
    I don't like it. It's not improving from your last one. It doesn't fit well together, it looks like a 'noob' layout, the effects used that is. Keep trying, you'll hopefully get a nice one soon. As for the above comment many 13 year olds design superiorly to that and make money designing professional, I was one, but y'know I'm 14 now
    Could you tell me the pacific bit that could be worked on?

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    from 1 to 10 like a 9





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    The whole thing

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    Ok ill try to bare that in mind hmmm i will play with it i guess

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    :p scott liked myn, so he does like some
    People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.

    anyway,

    It's alright..
    maybe...

    • Change the tabs ? Wen you're going to use drop-shadows please use them in a subtil way. dont go "overboard" on them. Try add a very subtil gradient on the tabs background color.
    • Use smaller corpses. (fonts). Your font atm there is quite big, try to keep it between 10-11px.
    • Hmm, at some boxes your text is about 2px from the boxes border. Try have a minimum of 5 to 10 px space between the border and your text
    • Use a different colour sheme ? you 'could' use that colour sheme, but try some different tints of that colour then. Have a look on this site: http://kuler.adobe.com/


    It's alright, but maybe just keep an eye on those points

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    Quote Originally Posted by RichardKnox View Post
    The whole thing
    Richard you've 'done a scott on him', hmm I like that, I might use it more often.

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    Quote Originally Posted by [oli] View Post
    :p scott liked myn, so he does like some
    People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.

    anyway,

    It's alright..
    maybe...
    • Change the tabs ? Wen you're going to use drop-shadows please use them in a subtil way. dont go "overboard" on them. Try add a very subtil gradient on the tabs background color.
    • Use smaller corpses. (fonts). Your font atm there is quite big, try to keep it between 10-11px.
    • Hmm, at some boxes your text is about 2px from the boxes border. Try have a minimum of 5 to 10 px space between the border and your text
    • Use a different colour sheme ? you 'could' use that colour sheme, but try some different tints of that colour then. Have a look on this site: http://kuler.adobe.com/

    It's alright, but maybe just keep an eye on those points
    words of wisdom thanks for the essay at least it helps me out



    changed the bg it may liven it up a bit ill try some other stuff

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    I Like it mate! its a really good design.

    +rep

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obverstation View Post
    I Like it mate! its a really good design.

    +rep

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    UPDATE

    what about them colours? :S

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