.V.I.C.A.R.'s firework fandeli

[.v.i.c.a.r.!]

dnt ask abt the name alrite but heres my alt!! Im nt v gd at makin them so dont bother replyin sayin THIS IS POO or stuf jus gime hints/tips on how to improve orrrr if ur rly nice copy n paste it n improve it for me thx.

[Kallot]

Its not that bad achually, it made me laugh.

6/10 +Rep.

Try shading the Earth a little more, it doesnt look 100% circular.

[Judge Judy]

kl tom

[Jamesy]

god I hate people who can't use vowels.

well it's good if you made it all, but last time I checked the earth was a rough sphere, not kind of pear shaped.

[.v.i.c.a.r.!]

god I hate people who can't use vowels.

well it's good if you made it all, but last time I checked the earth was a rough sphere, not kind of pear shaped.

like i sed tell me how to improve it dont frigin diss ma work!!!!

[Loqo]

but last time I checked the earth was a rough sphere, not kind of pear shaped.

LOL! Not bad Tom. But yeh, trying rounding off that earth shape. 9/10

[Kallot]

Vicar try to round off the Earth a little bit, im not one to talk as i can't even make alts though.

ps. ignore if someone insults you, arguments arent worth it.

[bradaka:o?]

dats well gd now can i get off this **** forum

[Alan_Carr]

OMG THATS AMAZING
10/10
i love the firework

[Jamesy]

like i sed tell me how to improve it dont frigin diss ma work!!!!

The phrase "last time i checked the earth is round" can kind of be taken as the planet in it isn't the right shape = telling you how to improve.

Said
don't
frigging (although I find that word stupid)
My

Hopefully you can use those in future instead of a lazy typing style that hurts the eyes.

And I'm not arguing. A discussion board has to have minor conflicts in order to function.