[2nd Alt] Habbo Bus™

[Kallot]

Its amazing what you can do when you start with a rectangle, this second alt is amazing and im quite proud of it.

Wheel was C+P'd from Inner Habbo Infobus and then edited just so you know, rest is from scratch.

I need to learn how to make glass decently though.



Rate /10 + C&C, Thanks.

[Echo54321]

too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10

[ItsDave]

too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10

I cant be bothered to type all of that. So yeah... thats what I would say

[Echo54321]

I cant be bothered to type all of that. So yeah... thats what I would say

you used me lol

[Kallot]

too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10

0/10? wow... go by a real rating system, not one which results in alts you like getting 10/10 and ones you hate getting 0/10.

I told everyone i have only made 2 alts atleast im not ripping or making little scribbles which arent isometric. :rolleyes:

If your going to post achually make C+C and don't just come here to insult alterations.

[Chocobos]

Its ok, 6/10.

Try making it less square, editing the windwipers and adding more shading.

It could be lush... +Rep if you improve.

[Kallot]

Improved:



What do you think?

Still thinking on how to de-square it.

[Chocobos]

It looks better slightly but its still a box, think carefully about how to de-square it and edit the background please.

7/10 now.

[Gangster]

nice, what are those things sitching out the window at the front?

[Kallot]

Windshield wipers mate

O.o ill show you what im going to leave this alt at:



Leaving it at that because its too much of a hard alt for my low skill to handle.