[2nd Alt] Habbo Bus™

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Its too square.. its needs to be abit more round? If you get me, its too box like. It needs shading as well, the tyres are really good.. They look like ones on infobuses.. But, the windscreenwiper things need to have alot more shape and shading, the lights need to look more 3D? Needs more shading, its abit short too.. The bits around the wheels are ok. Overall i rate it 5/10 :]

[Kallot]

I thought it was too square too personally but i couldnt do anything about it.

Btw, they are the wheels from the info bus which i edited slightly, as i said on first post

Thanks for your C+C,
Kallot.

[Bibliophobia]

to simple!

the lack of shading and dithering is a shame

maybe too much for you to do so soon

[Duck Hunt]

ono Giant Spikes Gonna Kill Me If i Get Hit o.O
Lol Edit The Window Wipers Thats One Main Thing.
MAke Door Bigger
Dont Rip I See u Made It Ontop Of Somebody's Car Alt Cuz Im Sure u Didnt Make The Wheels. Well Done For A Second. 6.5/10

DONT BE A SHOWOFF!


AND KALLOT THAT IS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, YOU JUST CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH!

*cowers in corner and cries to sleep*

[Kallot]

ono Giant Spikes Gonna Kill Me If i Get Hit o.O
Lol Edit The Window Wipers Thats One Main Thing.
MAke Door Bigger
Dont Rip I See u Made It Ontop Of Somebody's Car Alt Cuz Im Sure u Didnt Make The Wheels. Well Done For A Second. 6.5/10

I did not rip, i used the Infobus wheels then edited em' like i posted in my first post.

I made my own rectangle and edited it to look more bus-like.

Thanks for your C+C nevertheless.

Ps. aww boonz.

[Alkaz]

The wheels are awsome.

[TheRealUberSock]

The only part with any detail on it is the wheels, which as you said yourself, are Habbo made.

2/10, lots of room for improvement.

[Finkelstien]

Its ok, no great shakes but over all a 7/10 from my side. Keep it up.