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    Ok iv'e just finished writing a essay but I don't know what or really how I should do a conclusion I know to put the

    In conclusion
    But dont know what to put under it like in my Conclusion



    PS. the essay was about Nazi Ideology etc.

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    in a conclusion, you tend to summarise your points and give a few extra points. If it was a question like is it better that.... then you should include a personal opinion

    If you are struggling, id always resort to google or anohter search engine. just type in how to write conclusions

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    Reiterate what you've already said, touching on the main points. Leave with a strong message that displays your views and opinions clearly.
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    Hmm, you should just pick out your favourite points and explain them abit more or back them up abit more and make a summary of everything. And write your opinion, for or agaist whatever it is.

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    I'm not sure but sometimes I think you have to give your opinion on the matter as well, you've written all the evidence you then, as everyone has said, summarise it up with only key points and facts and say your views on it.
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    NEVER repeat what you have already said, you will get absolutly no marks for that. You need to make a judgement.
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    Nazi Ideology eh? If it's anything to do with History, I can help.

    Also, as stated above, don't repeat, finalise.

    Say something like, I believe the Nazi's were successful in doing this.. even though they did this.

    NEVER say I think the Nazi's did this right, but I think they did this wrong. That's contradiction and you'll lose a lot of marks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dr.Rdx View Post
    Nazi Ideology eh? If it's anything to do with History, I can help.

    Also, as stated above, don't repeat, finalise.

    Say something like, I believe the Nazi's were successful in doing this.. even though they did this.

    NEVER say I think the Nazi's did this right, but I think they did this wrong. That's contradiction and you'll lose a lot of marks.
    Damn incorrectly put apostrophes to hell. Nazis*

    Give your own expansive opinion of what you have written about in the heart of your essay. Do not repeat your points, but simply give your own opinions on them and round them up into an evaluative statement.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Misawa View Post
    Damn incorrectly put apostrophes to hell. Nazis*

    Give your own expansive opinion of what you have written about in the heart of your essay. Do not repeat your points, but simply give your own opinions on them and round them up into an evaluative statement.
    My bad, wasn't in an English grammar and punctuation mood

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    Highlight your main points and summarise your essay.
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