[BIO] Le Club Moderne.

[Alkaz]

Its really good apart from the walls look a bit wierd with the dark lines from the plants etc maybe it could be toned up a little, like the lines of the walls adno

[luce]

Wow thats good well done

[Ekalb]

I've got to say it looks okay, there's nothing majorly wrong, there are some funny shadows and pixel errors here and there on the furniture and there are a lot of black lines which could easily and probably effectively be removed.There are what I can only really describe as 'jpeg errors' around. The biggest problem is the fact it doesn't really look like a club. There are no patrons or clubbers, no speakers or a sound system, no drinks or drink machines and things of the like.

Unfourtunately the only words that come to mind when summing it up is "Average - It doesn't provide anything amazing or interesting that really shows off the creators talent and technique."

[jackass]

Okay thanks for all your comments.

This really is the longest project I have ever done, and it looks like i'm going to have to extend it some more eventually due to Ekalbs post. Thanks.

[brodeo]

I think people are being quite generous giving it such high marks, i would say about a 7/10 or an 8 at a push. You can obviously tell you've worked very hard on this though. To improve you could possibly make the bars less simple, even the minimalistic mode furniture has lots of detail. You could also attempt trying to improve the wood effect on the bars, maybe by adding another colour in. I'm not much of a fan of the projector either, i'm unsure why the way it displays the picture just doesn't appeal to me.

Good effort.

[DJ::Beatz]

I love it 9/10 ! Well done dude!

[TitaniumRubber]

This has come far since it was made.

[jackass]

Aha thanks all!

I'll plus rep all your comments when I get the chance.

[jackass]

Can't edit.

Just to let you all know, i'm going to make a final-final version of this using the comments and ideas that you put forward in this thread. It won't be here soon though, sorry!

[Helpo]

i enjoy seeing the use of executive recolored like that. :}

well done.