HAFTA - Twilight

[luce]

Yeah spread out the stuff it looks very dived atm i duno it just doesn't seem very twilighty

[IanBRAP]

very monotonous. too many trees not enough house. if he never sleeps why is there a matress? the stickers don't add any spice to the room at all, just list the attributes of your room and give us useless information that we don't want to know. Who cares if she seems amazed by his talents? I'm not amazed by your room making talents tbh

have you seen the film? because it explains this scene of the film and he has a matress in room. can i do anything to please you :| dont bother looking at my work if all you do is cuss it because i try ;|

[IanBRAP]

very monotonous. too many trees not enough house. if he never sleeps why is there a matress? the stickers don't add any spice to the room at all, just list the attributes of your room and give us useless information that we don't want to know. Who cares if she seems amazed by his talents? I'm not amazed by your room making talents tbh

Yeah spread out the stuff it looks very dived atm i duno it just doesn't seem very twilighty

its erm a forest? :S a forest isnt meant to spred out :S

Edited by mlp16 (Forum Moderator): Please do not double post, simply edit the previous post within the 15 minute time limit.

[Kyle]

have you seen the film? because it explains this scene of the film and he has a matress in room. can i do anything to please you :| dont bother looking at my work if all you do is cuss it because i try ;|

no i havent seen the film but i didnt understand why there was a matress if he didnt sleep, dont get agressive :rolleyes: yes its a forest but you havent concentrated enough on the house imo

[Con]

Just a few things:
Edwards room is upstairs and faces the forest, The doors do not face the forest as they face the exit road back onto the main street.
The whole house is enclosed by trees and is meant to be secluded.
Try moving the house into the centre of the room and put the trees surrounding the house.

It would look better if you made it 2 floors if you can stack well
And in Edward's room he doesn't have a piano, it's outside his room in a corridor. (Unless it is in the film, but it isn't in the book )
Also, he doesn't sleep so doesn't have a mattress. If he did it wouldn't be a hoboes/grungey mattress. Use a romantique bed/chair thing as that's the thing he has in the film.
He doesn't have a street lamp/toilet/sink/mocha machine/food trolley/tv in his room. He simply had a Chair/lounger, large music player with 100's of CDS
If you add more to the house it will look alot better and you can then spread the trees out around it

/twilight obsessed rant

EDIT:

have you seen the film? because it explains this scene of the film and he has a matress in room. can i do anything to please you :| dont bother looking at my work if all you do is cuss it because i try ;|

In the book he has a sofa/chair
In the film he has a lounger style chair. NO bed. As Bella actually says 'No bed?' which is when he tells her about the not sleeping thing

[IanBRAP]

Just a few things:
Edwards room is upstairs and faces the forest, The doors do not face the forest as they face the exit road back onto the main street.
The whole house is enclosed by trees and is meant to be secluded.
Try moving the house into the centre of the room and put the trees surrounding the house.

It would look better if you made it 2 floors if you can stack well
And in Edward's room he doesn't have a piano, it's outside his room in a corridor. (Unless it is in the film, but it isn't in the book )
Also, he doesn't sleep so doesn't have a mattress. If he did it wouldn't be a hoboes/grungey mattress. Use a romantique bed/chair thing as that's the thing he has in the film.
He doesn't have a street lamp/toilet/sink/mocha machine/food trolley/tv in his room. He simply had a Chair/lounger, large music player with 100's of CDS
If you add more to the house it will look alot better and you can then spread the trees out around it

/twilight obsessed rant

EDIT:

In the book he has a sofa/chair
In the film he has a lounger style chair. NO bed. As Bella actually says 'No bed?' which is when he tells her about the not sleeping thing

he does have a tv in his room.. and a white matress if you look again

[IanBRAP]

and also, it has the trees all around hence the windows thats why.

Edited by mlp16 (Forum Moderator): Please do not double post, simply edit the previous post within the 15 minute time limit.

[Con]

oh right, well the tv isn't mentioned so I forgot about the film
But there is no bed as he does not sleep.
http://www.apartmenttherapy.com/uima...ella112408.jpg
^ Desk, tv, chair.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ct79L...eature=related
^ rubbish quality, but still no bed. Small room.

EDIT: also the 'mattress' is a white lounger chair. Looks like a Habbo's Romantique chair.

[IanBRAP]

alright well i tried my hardest cant some people just wish me luck i tried. i mean ive just been permed i tried with the furni i had for god sake ;l

[Con]

we were just giving you some pointers to help you win.
But good luck anyway