Habbo Enlargement.

[Japan]

the face needs proper shading, but its very good
I Absolutely LOVE the hat (Where can I buy one?)
Lol 9/10 and + REP

[concretespoon]

Very nice. The shading is wonderful, but it lacks in the face. The hat is very well done.

There are some wonky areas. The nose, near the bridge area, seems off. I copied it into paint and zoomed in and saw that there's a dark brown line thats a different colour from the rest of the shading and it goes one pixel too low. It's make the line of the nose look disjointed, but its a simple thing to fix.

The feet also need some work. They look like completely different shapes. The one at the front has a lot of potential, but the flat diagonal line at the top of the shoe ruins it. It needs to be rounded more. If you looksat the habbo-sized example of the shoe, you'll see that when the line gets to the sole, it goes straight down as opposed to contiously going diagonal. (If this confuses you, tell me, and I can try and use pictures or something to explain myself better)

Very wonderful work though! 8.9/10

[Lucas0123]

the face needs proper shading, but its very good
I Absolutely LOVE the hat (Where can I buy one?)
Lol 9/10 and + REP

That Shop Err, Pound shop thats it...

Very nice. The shading is wonderful, but it lacks in the face. The hat is very well done.

There are some wonky areas. The nose, near the bridge area, seems off. I copied it into paint and zoomed in and saw that there's a dark brown line thats a different colour from the rest of the shading and it goes one pixel too low. It's make the line of the nose look disjointed, but its a simple thing to fix.

The feet also need some work. They look like completely different shapes. The one at the front has a lot of potential, but the flat diagonal line at the top of the shoe ruins it. It needs to be rounded more. If you looksat the habbo-sized example of the shoe, you'll see that when the line gets to the sole, it goes straight down as opposed to contiously going diagonal. (If this confuses you, tell me, and I can try and use pictures or something to explain myself better)

Very wonderful work though! 8.9/10

Wow, Never knew my piece of work was worth a 100+ word essay go me!

Thanks.

[Kipp]

Nice it looks cool.

[.:roxyblonde:.]

OMGGG! tbh i love it

its awesome and yeh face does need bit more shading

10/10

[Blinger1]

The arms look like they are paper thin?

[Kyle]

Wow, Never knew my piece of work was worth a 100+ word essay go me!

You're proud of her finding so many alts in your work? lol...

- feet aren't same size; need more shading too
- legs simply look almost cubic, which you could change by adding a little dithering
- shorts need alot of work; the shading is jagged and seems like you didn't bother at all with it... try smoothing it out a little
- hands also need a bit more attention, try shading them a little more
- hood shading is nice although I don't understand the part at the top of it, under the neck? There's a black line adding an extra, unneeded feature to the hood. you may also like to pay more attention to the string things (sorry Idk what they're called lol)
- neck/face lacks definition, it's very flat and could do with a bit more shading under the chin and around the face in general. instead of 1 pixel wide try dithering this too so that the face is more difined and less flat.
-hat shading is very nice, you have obviously spent the most time on this and made it look good, why not do the same on other parts?
- hair shading needs to be smoothed out it's very blocky