HISTORY ESSAY INIT BRAPP!

[Soy]

Why do people post their essays then when they get criticised they go "well my teacher said it's A*+++"? If you're so sure of your abilities what's the point?

exactly

[Stephen!]

It's too short.

[Frodo13.]

Not the best essay I've seen for probably the most simple essay I have seen on the topic. The essay is way too narrative, and there is not enough analysis or evaluation. Your points against are over exagerated, often with you posing them as much greater problems then they actually were, for example, Communism was never really a problem and didn't come to close to getting Germany. Yes, there were left right movments after WWI, but most attempts of revolution were right wing movements (Kapp Putsch and Munic Putsch).

Is this a GCSE or A Level essay by the way?

[marriott0.01]

Not the best essay I've seen for probably the most simple essay I have seen on the topic. The essay is way too narrative, and there is not enough analysis or evaluation. Your points against are over exagerated, often with you posing them as much greater problems then they actually were, for example, Communism was never really a problem and didn't come to close to getting Germany. Yes, there were left right movments after WWI, but most attempts of revolution were right wing movements (Kapp Putsch and Munic Putsch).

Is this a GCSE or A Level essay by the way?

GCSE....

[Minstrels]

What kind of mug uses "BRAPP" now-a-days and believes that "shanked" sounds like a good word?

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Edited by Yoshimitsui (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not be rude.

[marriott0.01]

Get out of my threads if you don't like me, god no need to complain about everything. Jeez

[Minstrels]

Get out of my threads if you don't like me, god no need to complain about everything. Jeez

Oh I'm sorry, why do you bother posting your work if you're not capable of taking criticism? If that's the case why don't you hold back until you have a decent finished article, or is that the finished one?

[Frodo13.]

GCSE....

Yeah, thought so due to how easy the question was and the reference to the Edelweiss Pirates.

[Abbie.]

its ok

could of said more about womans roles and explained the 2 K's better

saying that i cba to read it all

[marriott0.01]

I had like 14 things to choose from and we only had to pick 3, so I only did a few