Teenage Lives

[Mrs.McCall]

Not what i expected, Sarah commited suicide, I knew that Danny and Serena was both going to die but didint think they would die next to each other. The last bit at the bootom when Danny and Serena are in the hallway I never got that bit but besides that it has been a great series i wil +rep you

Edit: Must spread rep i will when i can.

Haha you should've used spoiler tags there for people who haven't read it.

The last bit was because the original series was set in a school and it was when danny was happiest.

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Serena was handing him over to Nate

[Pyroka]

Wowwwwwww.... They truly were the best scripts, and only scripts btw, I've ever read. I don't think it matters that I've not read any others, they were just superb. McCall you should be freakin proud of yourself, I've always liked the work you've done with Teenage Lives and I hope that you continue the legacy in some shape or form. It really was top-notch, even if it was stupidly dramatic and horrific for Danny, the fact is that some people probably do have lives like that. Not all Teenagers will, but everyone has a difference experience in life and Danny really had a rocky one.

You can almost relate to them though, because all he wanted was to be loved, and in the end he died happy. It was a shame the baby died, also a shame we dont get to see what will happen to Sarah or how it will impact on Lionel's and Barbera (small roles, but still equally shaken by whats happened). Godddd really McCall, wowwwww.

+rep if I can, it really was ace from series 1 all the way to this penultimate series 4(?). Well done

[Mrs.McCall]

Thanks a lot for those kind comments. I haven't ever written anything that I got so deeply involved with the characters. From the smaller roles like Lionel and Barbara to the big characters like Danny. Danny, to be, symbolises all the problems teenages go through. The angst, the unrequited love, the fear of what is to come. It got a bit bizzare in some stages (like 10 stabbings, 5 car crashes and 8 gunshots probably) but still.

From my point of view, Sarah died. Her flat was HIGH up. As for Barbara and Lionel... god knows. Shame they accepted Danny a bit too late and would they have done so if Danny hadn't gotten cancer?

After FIVE series, it's sad to finish it but I think if I had carried on it would've died a slow death.

[Pyroka]

FIVE? Seems like less! I knew I was wrong though haha, I think its just the first 3 series integrated so well. The first and second were by far the best I think, to be honest I can't remember half of it. I do remember Chad and Rick though omg they were BAAAAAAAAAD.

You're right in finishing it now, I think it ended on a high. You could post one last story just as an epilogue, yknow, 'where are they now?' or something like that... But most of the people from the 5 series' died. It was craaaaazy though, and I loved it for that cuz seriously it was unpredictable. The baby getting stabbed was pretty predictable tbh, but both of them dying? Didn't expect that, I expected you to finish it as one of the doctors says time of death,blah blah blah, but you dont say who survived.

That could've been quite literally, the cruellest finisher. Still pretty damn good, the quality has been top-mark from day one which must be at least a year ago now?

[Mrs.McCall]

FIVE? Seems like less! I knew I was wrong though haha, I think its just the first 3 series integrated so well. The first and second were by far the best I think, to be honest I can't remember half of it. I do remember Chad and Rick though omg they were BAAAAAAAAAD.

You're right in finishing it now, I think it ended on a high. You could post one last story just as an epilogue, yknow, 'where are they now?' or something like that... But most of the people from the 5 series' died. It was craaaaazy though, and I loved it for that cuz seriously it was unpredictable. The baby getting stabbed was pretty predictable tbh, but both of them dying? Didn't expect that, I expected you to finish it as one of the doctors says time of death,blah blah blah, but you dont say who survived.

That could've been quite literally, the cruellest finisher. Still pretty damn good, the quality has been top-mark from day one which must be at least a year ago now?

Gosh yeah, quite a while a go now.

I knew if I finished on any sort of cliff hanger i'd want to write more. There will probably be specials like "what could've been" if Nate hadn't died etc hahaha.

But yeah I didn't want to be cruel and I think them both dying was a good twist because, with my writing, you don't usually expect that!

[Mrs.McCall]

Wow over 1000 hits!! I will definatly be doing a series of specials. The first will follow Lionel and Barbara... How they met, how he earnt his fortune and the dark secrets Barbara hid.

[Pyroka]

YAY MCCALL YAY YAY YAY.

[Calvin]

i loved it

it was great, had to be one of the best things i've ever read haha!

+rep.

[Japan]

I think you should seriously consider a career in screen writing / scripting.
Amaaaazing =D
Would +REP but I've already +repped you and I've gotta spread >

[Mrs.McCall]

YAY MCCALL YAY YAY YAY.

Haha. The specials might tide you over

i loved it

it was great, had to be one of the best things i've ever read haha!

+rep.

Wow thank you

I think you should seriously consider a career in screen writing / scripting.
Amaaaazing =D
Would +REP but I've already +repped you and I've gotta spread >

Thanks. I'm going to Uni to do Scriptwriting so you never know!