wip pls say its ok

[BoyBetterKnow]

Thanks for your criticism, can I have some harsh criticism now.

The layout isn't actually that bad, it's just your attitude...

You've come from ClubHabbo, think you're all big and going on about how you don't care about Habbo Forums, yet you're on here at 8:33 AM posting?

At HabboxForum, most of us aren't as immature as the people you are used to from ClubHabbo Forum.

Anyway, I like the layout

[Meti]

That looks waaaay to simple and boring.

[Blinger1]

ich bin bruno your austrian frounden

*** is that? If its an attempt at german then sheesh, its horrible.

and so is the layout.

[Agnostic Bear]

ich bin bruno your austrian frounden. I had a bash (oi) at designing a layout with inspiration from Sir Joe Warburton


i am to become 'good' so fire all your harsh criticism for I need it!

thanks +REp and it's wip.

work in progress fo yo who do no, and I know there's a random grey splotch to the side of the search bar, but ich bin.

Lets see, you use Verdana so that's instantly a poor layout, this isn't habbo hotel we don't need to use Verdana. The boxes aren't aligned with each other, the username and password fields fonts are too small for the box they lie in, the submit button doesn't align with the text fields,

• You use Verdana, this isn't habbo hotel we don't need to use Verdana.
• The boxes on the top aren't aligned with each other
• The boxes on the top aren't aligned with the sides of the bottom
• There's a random box on the right — Why?
• The text in the input fields are too small for the size of the fields
• The submit button doesn't align with the rest of the inputs
• The remember me box is too close to the inputs
• The navigation has no discernible way of telling it apart from the rest of the layout apart from a search box and a bit of spacing.
• Register an account with website doesn't look very appealing to me, why would I want to register? What could make me register?
• Advert only has one a, add is not an abbreviation of advert, ad is.
• Welcome notices is a title, why isn't it emphasised?
• The paragraph of text is all squashed up and horrible to read, why isn't it formatted in a way that draws people to it?

Other than that, 10/10

Minus the errors, 1/10. You managed to create an image so that's an instant 1 there.

I'm sure I've covered every point there.

[bruno]

Habbo use Voltor, so your facts get a outstanding 1/10.

Verdana is a great font, other then that thanks for your comments.

[Blinger1]

on the client it uses volter.. on the website its volter. Extract from their css files

body {
	background-color: #e3e3db;
	background-image: url(../images/bg.png);
	font-size: 11px;
	font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;
	text-align: center;
	margin: 0;
	padding: 0;
}

[BoyBetterKnow]

Lets see, you use Verdana so that's instantly a poor layout.

oh my jew bear. Verdana is a nice font. Arial is probably the best for text but verdana, when used right, looks nice

[Fehm]

okay..
erm


its ok.

[Agnostic Bear]

oh my jew bear. Verdana is a nice font. Arial is probably the best for text but verdana, when used right, looks nice

Verdana is a horrible font and never looks nice, I don't view anything in verdana.

[BoyBetterKnow]

Verdana is a horrible font and never looks nice, I don't view anything in verdana.

Hmm. I still think you can make it look nice