[Rk] - Just Married _ Sp September

Rollerkingdom · 01-09-2009, 08:54 PM

Make up

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Black_Apalachi · 02-09-2009, 03:48 AM

So you did that enlargement someone posted in another thread then?

This is amazing but each update is slowly taking it more and more over-board.

I wasn't sure about the rice until you added the rabbit and I thought this and the cloud were a nice touch. I much prefer the girl with lighter hair but the make-up is awful - she looks like she has buck teeth. Either do lipstick on a closed mouth or get rid of it; it was fine without.

The floor I wouldn't worry about from a material/texture aspect; I'd leave it as it is but just make it a nice rosy shade of pink rather than the dull green.

I also preferred the highlights on the guy's jacket which I think you've removed.

I would stop adding bits to it from now on as this is a prime example of less is more. Very good work I have to say, +rep

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Out of interest, is the duck pillar originally from a Water Garden?

Edit: I think I prefer the darker hair on second thoughts. It's just the thought of both dark hair clashing that put me off, but it's OK really.

Accipiter · 02-09-2009, 09:15 AM

to make her mouth look better, if you have paint.net grab a red from her lips and put it quite largly transparent and go down her mouth, and then maybe add a touch of grey transparent and it might look like her teeth are back in her mouth. the make up on the eyes i think is an improovement tbh as the face was to plain before and all in all i think her mouth is an improovement.

the rabbit looks like its eating the rice ;D

Rollerkingdom · 02-09-2009, 10:11 AM

Originally Posted by Robald

So you did that enlargement someone posted in another thread then?

This is amazing but each update is slowly taking it more and more over-board.

I wasn't sure about the rice until you added the rabbit and I thought this and the cloud were a nice touch. I much prefer the girl with lighter hair but the make-up is awful - she looks like she has buck teeth. Either do lipstick on a closed mouth or get rid of it; it was fine without.

The floor I wouldn't worry about from a material/texture aspect; I'd leave it as it is but just make it a nice rosy shade of pink rather than the dull green.

I also preferred the highlights on the guy's jacket which I think you've removed.

I would stop adding bits to it from now on as this is a prime example of less is more. Very good work I have to say, +rep

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Out of interest, is the duck pillar originally from a Water Garden?

Edit: I think I prefer the darker hair on second thoughts. It's just the thought of both dark hair clashing that put me off, but it's OK really.

First of all Thanks for this great Comment, so as you said you preferred the black hair better so mkay, let's keep that. Btw what enlargement are you talking about? This enlargement is my own alt that i did from the first page =) if you check back.

I will be working on the girls' mouth a bit more around so i can get a nice lipstick without her teeth showing up or not that much.

Glad you liked the rabbit with the rice idea

but for some reason on my computer the green floor with the shading looks rlly good, but ill give it a check on my sis pc which has a lighter screen.

The highlights were removed because some people were saying that i had ripped the SP example shading so i just took it off so they can stop saying stuff when i really didn't rip anything. The duck statue enlargement is from the water garden

and I don't plan on adding anything else, Ill just be now working on the stuff that need some fixs, mainly her mouth.

Originally Posted by Voiceover.

to make her mouth look better, if you have paint.net grab a red from her lips and put it quite largly transparent and go down her mouth, and then maybe add a touch of grey transparent and it might look like her teeth are back in her mouth. the make up on the eyes i think is an improovement tbh as the face was to plain before and all in all i think her mouth is an improovement.

the rabbit looks like its eating the rice ;D

I don't have paint.net, All was done on paint.. so ill figure out a way there to fix it and make it look better but i agree that the make up made it look way better. and yes the rabbit is suppose to be eating the rice hehehe

Thanks.. will update soon as possible, now i gotta head to my first day of school.

Edit: Is it Better?

A mod please join this post,

Edited by Jamesy (Forum Moderator): Posts merged

Black_Apalachi · 02-09-2009, 12:46 PM

Oh just someone posted that guy in that size (but in a normal pose) and said someone else had made it, they were just showing it off because they thought it was cool. So I realised who actually made it once I saw this thread

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The mouth still looks a little odd to me... as if she's either covering big teeth or pouting. It's fine really though; the overall alteration is still awesome, regardless.

And yeah, the grass isn't a big deal either. I just thought pink would suit and look nice with the pillar.

Glad the feedback was useful!

Rollerkingdom · 02-09-2009, 07:52 PM

Originally Posted by Robald

Oh just someone posted that guy in that size (but in a normal pose) and said someone else had made it, they were just showing it off because they thought it was cool. So I realised who actually made it once I saw this thread

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The mouth still looks a little odd to me... as if she's either covering big teeth or pouting. It's fine really though; the overall alteration is still awesome, regardless.

And yeah, the grass isn't a big deal either. I just thought pink would suit and look nice with the pillar.

Glad the feedback was useful!

Thank you, i still have a feeling that i can fix her mouth to make it better not like it's covering her teeth, ill work around it and will upload whenever possible.

Describe · 02-09-2009, 07:57 PM

I think it's great and I wouldn't add much more to it as too much in such a space might leave a 'crammed' effect which would dampen how good the piece actually is.