The bricks are improved but they all have the same on them; I realise that it's going to take a while but try to get rid of the monotony of it, mix it up a little. hair looks okay but it seems as if a bird has just... on her head.

The bricks are improved but they all have the same on them; I realise that it's going to take a while but try to get rid of the monotony of it, mix it up a little. hair looks okay but it seems as if a bird has just... on her head.
It's really hard to shade her hair >:S, the bricks ive actually not kept the same spots on them.. i mixed a lot of variations
add some shattered glass to the floor and around the frame would replace the fact of having a full window. And fill it with more action.
should add some sort of rim around the bottom of the house to so its not just half a brick so it'll be a little edge, red would probaly be best to use.
i agree with the hair the white bits look nasty, with her hair use purple, dark blue and all greys. (with black) it'll look good if done right.
i like the idea of adding the rim, about the hair i am not sure how to shade it :S i am still wondering how...add some shattered glass to the floor and around the frame would replace the fact of having a full window. And fill it with more action.
should add some sort of rim around the bottom of the house to so its not just half a brick so it'll be a little edge, red would probaly be best to use.
i agree with the hair the white bits look nasty, with her hair use purple, dark blue and all greys. (with black) it'll look good if done right.
i think the way you done it in your wedding one with more detail would do it for you. Just follow from the flicks add blue around the furthest end like you would on a ball and it would look like light hitting it the purple, all the colours could be used to make the hairs seperate to.
Why does she have my man juice on her still? Lol.
I can't realy criticise it personally because I think it's alright considering the colour limits and that.
Maybe redesign some lasers so they're not all the same?
Ill try doing it but if i fail ill prb just leave it like thisi think the way you done it in your wedding one with more detail would do it for you. Just follow from the flicks add blue around the furthest end like you would on a ball and it would look like light hitting it the purple, all the colours could be used to make the hairs seperate to.
thanks for the idea.. ill make some diff colors
Small update:
• Made some diff color of lasers
• added rim to the wall of building
woman looks like she's covered in semen
Grass looks a tad better, being the other way round
Light Green >> Dark Green
Dark Green >> Light Green
Try it with different shading...
But i dnno![]()
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