What can I add to cancercaps.co.uk?

[Jonster]

I fail to see why a charity website would be aimed at kids.

I think you will find that he meant the charity is for kids - the money raised goes towards kids that have cancer or are severely ill.

Although, that was never clear even after reading the first 3 paragraphs of the great wall of text which no-one will ever read. There really needs to be a banner or image across the main content area with something like "Help change a childs life today and support the continuous research into putting a stop to cancer!". Would make it a lot lot lot clearer instead of me reading through the campaign page to finally see half way down:

they moan about having to go to school or the fact they want the latest toy and are not allowed it. WELL…. Inside Birmingham Childrens Hospital lies hundreds of children dying of cancer BRAIN TUMOURS! LEAUKIMIA! To name just two.

Make it clearer!

[Dentafrice]

It has too much information, you need some callouts with pictures of the actual caps, not just a bunch of text. I got bored reading it already, and if this is designed for kids, they wouldn't spend a lick of time reading that.

The whole site is unorganized..

There is no alignment..



To be honest.. it looks like a Habbo site turned charity. There's no organization to the layout of it, it's all text.. no pictures of the product, no anything.. it's hard to even get the idea of what the site is about? Your logo and banner should reflect what you are actually doing.. sure it's got a picture of a kid with cancer.. but does it have anything to do with the "Cancer Cap" idea? No..

Rethink the theme, rethink the design, rethink a lot of what the site is.. find your theme and how you want to express that theme.. then start again.

At this point all you can do is add a radio and a request line and you'd be set with a fansite.

Don't get me wrong, the idea is a great idea! What you guys are doing is great, just going about it in the wrong way. Congrats on that.

[iDenning]

Thanks for feedback, Im not doing the content or anything like that so that aint my fault lol. And the layout is working fine atm as its made £274.53 GBP