My Latest Hotel | x |

[rokgal]

I do believe it is yours

As from the previous thread you did learn isometrics, and the lines in the windows are basic knowledge to many after a few alts, The building is plain, you should start with a few more smaller alts so you can add a bit more detail and have more time to do the little things.

THANKYOU someone on my side btw the on where i was bobba wasnt my latest building i done before this and as in the description i said i just realised i didnt finish the windows

and this is my previous one that i did post


... not that rubbish one from the beggining of july!!!!!!!

[Accipiter]

I do believe you have the potential to become better you just now need to try more complicated things, make try doing a small suburban house shape

[rokgal]

err ok but the tiles and like floor boards and stuff ill try and ddo will be *****

[Accipiter]

Just use trial and error, if you think they look bad, try and pin point the worst bit and change it to something else like lighter shades or separate it more

that was just one example you can try anything you like

[rokgal]

:p ill try at it and pm it to you x

btw i finished the plain windowing bits but too me its a bit crowded x

[Jessicrawrr]

Yeah, all the windows are way too much ;P
You should try a bigger window with views inside the hotel maybe,
or draw a logo for the hotel

[smiffy70]

no offence but can you do mirror work in a generator? coz the windows curve in exact same place on both sides, take a look at the right sides of bottom windows to see wat im on about

[Hayleigh]

Everyones being really rude tbh maybe some constructive advice like the light one i really like it

[Samantha]

The windows are way too much, why don't you do a few on each side. I believe you copied and pasted the windows over and over and didn't really look if they were straigth Charlotte. They are quite rushed I do admit.

Also, the pillars holding up the hotel are uneven, if you look at each end they are different sizes away if you get me.

It would look better lighter at the top like Mr. Selena Gomez said.

Also another colour would be really good as if you had that in real life you would have flys and ladybirds on it a lot in summer.

Also the windows are tremendously small, maybe expand on them a bit, make them a bit bigger and less of them.

I think that when the corner point comes you could like do a glass escalator type thing? so you can actually get upto the top level, unless you put an helicopter pad on top.

And what is it meant to be? Office buildings? Flats? Flats would be good if you added balconies too and maybe incorporate plants on the balconies.

Anyhow Charlotte you have really improved from your first design however, I really like your version two on the other thread better.

But I hope you will take my ideas into consideration!

[Gibs960]

I like it but it definitely needs more shading!