My New Short Film - Revelations

[Niall!]

Certainly much better than my attempt then again there were many reasons mine was so rushed (such as the teacher being off for all of three weeks of the course -.-)
The only real complaint is the actors but it's completely understandable given that they are amateurs working for free (I presume?)

Would be interested to see more, hoping you start a mini-series soon.

[peteyt]

Sadly actors cost

£20 an hour, travel expenses, accommodation and food while on set

It cost us £100 just to get one guy there and back as he was from London.

[peteyt]

Quite good. I like the camera angles in most parts.
My guess on who the little girl is: A passed away daughter, maybe?
Favourite moment would be 3:11.
Improvements:
When they were at the bar or whatever it was, and the piano sort of music came on, it kinda felt misplaced. Felt rather odd when the music was calm and then it went all rock/action music.
+Rep.

Oh yeah forgot to add the whole thing about the music. Because of some footage lost it wasn't of obvious. Originally the idea was that the demon guy had been around for a long time, maybe all the main's life. He keeps hearing a music box everything the guy is near, which is linked to his daughter. He has nightmares, with an eye and music box.

A lot more stuff would be explored and explained if it did turn into a series

[Judas]

i like that concept, shame some of the footage was lost. i thought it was really good, creepy some of the sound was a bit off in places but i think you pulled it off well, good job + rep

[Stephen!]

I thought that the scene where he looks through the photos could have used better lighting. I couldn't see most of them because of the reflection from the light.

Good short though. Enjoyed it.

[peteyt]

I thought that the scene where he looks through the photos could have used better lighting. I couldn't see most of them because of the reflection from the light.

Good short though. Enjoyed it.

I think that was the directors intention, or he likes how it shows now anyway's ha - they where gory photos and it kind of helps leave some imagination