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[Judas]

awomg love the 8bit one sounds like pacman, space invaders and mario lmaoo infact, have you sampled the noises of super mario bros?
Some nice stuff here can't wait to hear how these progress

hehehe yes i did thank you xxx

Love it! Well done

thank you

[lawrawrrr]

such an amazinggg response thank you +rep

i don't really know what you mean by pwfffhh is there any way you could possibly describe it differently?

and yes i was hoping someone would pick up on that just to check i'm not the only one that thinks that. i'm trying to work on the changing of the section so thank you does anybody have any suggestions on how i can do this so it doesn't sound so sudden?

well i wrote it on piano initially then i used fl studio and most of the instruments are different vsts i downloaded from around the internet. some people say fl studio is just a program for amateurs or whatever but thats all i am and i can make things like this that i am proud of so i'm not bothered.

Now I'm back I shall continue my in-depth analysis............

There's nothing wrong with amateur programs, I love them, like, my friend runs a successful comic blog site and she uses MS Paint so there ya go!

Okay well if you listen to it, it sounds like the repeated note is going to happen again, but there's a sort of muffled sound over the top... i'm terrible at describing things XDXD

Right... ideas for link
As I said this isn't my type of music buttt how about the underneath rising melody comes in over the rave-y bit while the rave bit fades out? It also doesn't seem balanced, as the last part is a lot shorter. Only tiny things though - I'm a perfectionist obsessed with symmetry so yeah... XD

SOUNDING AMAZING XO


8BIT PIECE:

This reminds me of that scene in the original Tron, lovinggg the game influences!! Can't really see anything wrong, apart from the link - I KNOW they're difficult to write... how about a reverse cannon effect (if you can/know what I mean at all)

OOoooooohhhh I really like these. Like, a LOT.

[Judas]

Okay well if you listen to it, it sounds like the repeated note is going to happen again, but there's a sort of muffled sound over the top... i'm terrible at describing things XDXD

I'm still not exactly sure what you meann do you mean the echo between where the sections change? cos if not i'm really puzzled here it could just be youtube cos the sound quality is worse

As I said this isn't my type of music buttt how about the underneath rising melody comes in over the rave-y bit while the rave bit fades out? It also doesn't seem balanced, as the last part is a lot shorter. Only tiny things though - I'm a perfectionist obsessed with symmetry so yeah... XD

The only problem with that is I produced the two different parts separately, and the piano end part is a completely different tempo to the main part so if I put them together it would just be out of time and hopefully the last part wont sound as unbalanced when i record the vocals, because right now i'm planning for that whole part to have vocals over it. but when i do come to record it i will definitely try that out and see how it sounds

8BIT PIECE:

This reminds me of that scene in the original Tron, lovinggg the game influences!! Can't really see anything wrong, apart from the link - I KNOW they're difficult to write... how about a reverse cannon effect (if you can/know what I mean at all)

OOoooooohhhh I really like these. Like, a LOT.

when you talk about the link here i presume you're talking about the door still and not 8 bit? otherwise what link do you mean

awww i love you you're so wonderful

[lawrawrrr]

I'm still not exactly sure what you meann do you mean the echo between where the sections change? cos if not i'm really puzzled here it could just be youtube cos the sound quality is worse

meh it's not even major dw XD

The only problem with that is I produced the two different parts separately, and the piano end part is a completely different tempo to the main part so if I put them together it would just be out of time and hopefully the last part wont sound as unbalanced when i record the vocals, because right now i'm planning for that whole part to have vocals over it. but when i do come to record it i will definitely try that out and see how it sounds

Probably - you can;t really judge till it's all finished, when are you recordinggg?

when you talk about the link here i presume you're talking about the door still and not 8 bit? otherwise what link do you mean

8 bit at... 2.24

awww i love you you're so wonderful

oveyou:

[Judas]

OHHH okay i know exactly what you mean, i'm gonna work on that thanks

and i'm not sure when to record i made the 8 bit instrumental first time about 3 months ago and the door a few weeks ago and just been making small changes every now and then to both of them since

[lawrawrrr]

OHHH okay i know exactly what you mean, i'm gonna work on that thanks

and i'm not sure when to record i made the 8 bit instrumental first time about 3 months ago and the door a few weeks ago and just been making small changes every now and then to both of them since

ehehehe i know what you mean ,took me 4 mo to get my AS composition recorded XD

[Judas]

i just finished a piece for gcse that took me 4 months too ;l

[wiktoria]

I love the first one but you do need to work on the changing of the sections. Other than that I think it's really good.
OMG I SERIOUSLY LOVE THE SECOND ONE AHHHH it's like a mix between pacman and space invaders (duhh wiki lol) +rep

[Jessicrawrr]

The first ones nice, it's a bit dull on the first section, I like it when it livens up.
The second ones like the others said, pacman and mario
Nice work

[Judas]

I love the first one but you do need to work on the changing of the sections. Other than that I think it's really good.
OMG I SERIOUSLY LOVE THE SECOND ONE AHHHH it's like a mix between pacman and space invaders (duhh wiki lol) +rep

thank you so much ehehe hopefully i will fix the changeover soon and i'll post it when i'm done thank youuuu

The first ones nice, it's a bit dull on the first section, I like it when it livens up.
The second ones like the others said, pacman and mario
Nice work

hopefully it will be better with the singing over the top, but thank you so much

you know it's interesting all the people i've shown them to have different opinions, some prefer the first and some prefer the second it's like really mixed which is great