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    Default " *** " <-- What does it actually mean?

    Hi thereeeeee

    Don't know where to post it but this seems appropriate

    I'm writing a story for English and I'm opening up with a brief explanation of the situation, characters etc. and then I'm tempted to put "* * *" under one of the paragraphs.

    Am I right in thinking it shows a change in time/setting etc.?

    Like I want the next paragraph to take place like 6 months prior


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    I was always under the impression that it just meant a totally different scene, but obviously it can't be that, since we'd see it everyday - I'm also vaguely interested in this, I'm surprised I don't know - google time

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    I remember being told it was a change in time, I was using it for flashbacks to show that it had happened previously etc. .

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    Marks a significant passage in time or dramatically different scene (usually in perspective too). That's what I use it as and my tutor said last year!







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    Quote Originally Posted by Kardan View Post
    I was always under the impression that it just meant a totally different scene, but obviously it can't be that, since we'd see it everyday - I'm also vaguely interested in this, I'm surprised I don't know - google time
    Attempted google. It's a hard question to ask haha.

    Quote Originally Posted by laura View Post
    Marks a significant passage in time or dramatically different scene (usually in perspective too). That's what I use it as and my tutor said last year!
    Quote Originally Posted by Samanfa View Post
    I remember being told it was a change in time, I was using it for flashbacks to show that it had happened previously etc. .
    Thankyou both! Do I just do one space down, like a normal paragraph and just three "* * *"?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ardemax View Post
    Attempted google. It's a hard question to ask haha.





    Thankyou both! Do I just do one space down, like a normal paragraph and just three "* * *"?
    I found that too

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ardemax View Post
    Attempted google. It's a hard question to ask haha.





    Thankyou both! Do I just do one space down, like a normal paragraph and just three "* * *"?
    I believe so, I centered the * * * and just went down a line .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Samanfa View Post
    I believe so, I centered the * * * and just went down a line .
    Thanks very much, reps+ to all!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ardemax View Post
    Attempted google. It's a hard question to ask haha.


    Thankyou both! Do I just do one space down, like a normal paragraph and just three "* * *"?
    yeah its like


    paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph fullstop.

    ***

    paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph


    so a paragraph break above and below it







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    Generally it does mean a complete change in time or setting, so not just moving on to the next event perhaps. I don't think it's used all that much really, but if you are going to use it it's sometimes useful for moving in/out of dream sequences, or as you say to go back in a character's memory. The very best use of it that I've ever read is in a Roger Zelazny novel in the first-person narrative where the teller uses it very consciously to skip out a sex scene, but also to make the reader really feel connected to the character as though the book were really him telling it to you -


    "It's getting chilly out here."
    "Yes."
    "Let's repair within."
    "I'd like to repair."
    I put down my cigar and we stood and she kissed me. So I put my arm around her trim and sparkling, blue-kept waist and we moved away from the bar, toward the archway, through the archway and beyond, into the house we were leaving.

    Let's make it a triple-asterisk break...

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    but Zelazny was an absolute genius with everything he did so don't feel bad if you can't quite create that feeling in your school work
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