Jack n Jills Journey Jump

[steamyxo]

Hey this is the main room to my auto game, ignore wat the badge says and the room, the owner of the room is on holliday so she couldnt change it, give me ur opinions please, its all about jack n jill baisicily , thats their house, and thru out of the game u needa get their bucket to the final room. some rooms are seasoned, some are fairy tale themed, i dnt wanna reveal too much till im done with it some screenies:

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opinions pls, not to botherd about changing anythin, jus wanna no wat u guys think, no stupid/unreasonable comments pls.

Oh and, i couldnt do this without these special people: Plebings, ,Unicornxox- and last but not least, Hazalece

Thread moved by Nick (Forum Moderator): From 'Habbo In General' as it is more suited here.

[Matt]

I'm liking it and extra points for creativity. Maybe get rid of the xmas teleporter? In my opinion it doesn't look good in it's current position. Also the host/VIP area could do with something else, something to make it less plain? Other then that, I like it!

[steamyxo]

I'm liking it and extra points for creativity. Maybe get rid of the xmas teleporter? In my opinion it doesn't look good in it's current position. Also the host/VIP area could do with something else, something to make it less plain? Other then that, I like it!

xmas teleporter is a chimney and i mite put it to like an edge or summin, i dont wanan get rid of it tbh, and i did tell my partner we needa add more to the vip host area but she said it was fine, ill go around shops now lookin for stuff, can u recomend wat type of stuff would look good? and thx

[geo]

that's cute and it's a nice new idea. i love it when people do something a little different and change layouts and designs.
hide the black though

[Jazz]

very cute nice that someone is being original , dont like the fountain or the octopus thing (sorry im not furni savvy) they look randomly placed and they black spots could probably do with being covered, but it look fab otherwise

[iBlueBox]

If I'm being completely honest.

I'm not fond on it,

The house is great however the room dose not look that good with the rock walls at the ends with them not meeting corners.

The duck seems out of place at the side of the room would be better in the pond.

Also the black beneath the rock makes the room seem un-finished.

The host area with the LTD's seem rather out of place espically with the octopus. Would be nicer more themed towards a garden such as benches ect.

Also the gap in the tree poster makes it look unfinished also, posters going along behind the house would make the room feel more complete.

[steamyxo]

If I'm being completely honest.

I'm not fond on it,

The house is great however the room dose not look that good with the rock walls at the ends with them not meeting corners.

The duck seems out of place at the side of the room would be better in the pond.

Also the black beneath the rock makes the room seem un-finished.

The host area with the LTD's seem rather out of place espically with the octopus. Would be nicer more themed towards a garden such as benches ect.

Also the gap in the tree poster makes it look unfinished also, posters going along behind the house would make the room feel more complete.

i ejected the wall by accident and im not the best builder and not as qualitied as u, the duck is for the wired to work, with out it it wudnt wurk, im still editing the host area, i think the seating looks fine. i will fill in the blacks later on, and the house is complete, u dont see missing rock dividers n stuff. and explain to me more y ur not fond of it

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very cute nice that someone is being original , dont like the fountain or the octopus thing (sorry im not furni savvy) they look randomly placed and they black spots could probably do with being covered, but it look fab otherwise

thx still making the host area atm

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that's cute and it's a nice new idea. i love it when people do something a little different and change layouts and designs.
hide the black though

aw ty and will do with the blacks.

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And guys could u mention any themes i could put in for the host area

[Absently]

I really like your creativity and I look forward to playing it! As before people have said, not too keen on the host area it looks like you just had the furni already so just dropped it. I really like the house tho and I think the Xmas teleport goes really well Although, is there anyway you can hide the duck or use an object that is easier to hide for the wired to work? I just think it looks too out of place, epecially for people with big screens.

[steamyxo]

I really like your creativity and I look forward to playing it! As before people have said, not too seen on the host area it looks like you just had the furni already so just dropped it. I really like the house tho and I think the Xmas teleport goes really well Although, is there anyway you can hide the duck or use an object that is easier to hide for the wired to work? I just think it looks too out of place, epecially for people with big screens.

could u suggest any good linked themes fr the host/vip areea for me, and ill use like a flower or summin instead idk

[iBlueBox]

i ejected the wall by accident and im not the best builder and not as qualitied as u, the duck is for the wired to work, with out it it wudnt wurk, im still editing the host area, i think the seating looks fine. i will fill in the blacks later on, and the house is complete, u dont see missing rock dividers n stuff. and explain to me more y ur not fond of it

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thx still making the host area atm

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aw ty and will do with the blacks.

---------- Post added 04-04-2013 at 01:11 PM ----------

And guys could u mention any themes i could put in for the host area

- Can the duck not be hidden as it seems out of place outside the room.

- I dont think the seats fit well in an outside environment

- I never said the actual house was incomplete.

- The missing rock dividers are where you can see the black / you haven't any corners.

- I explained all reasons in my original post why I'm not fond.