Feedback on my song?

[Judas]

Hey guys some of u might remember that I like to make music. This is the first thing I've uploaded in a while, it's just something that I recorded earlier this evening. I wrote it last night. It's just a pretty rough demo and I haven't mixed it very well yet, also I have some work to do on the backing vocals. I just wanna know what else you guys think could make it better. So if you have any feedback/criticisms/love to give me, it is all welcome

https://soundcloud.com/harrybmusic/untitled-demo

oh and if you can think of a name let me know as well lol

[Jurv]

i really enjoyed it. your voice and the slow tempo reminds me of josef salvat who's one of my faves. gd work!!

if i was to give any constructive criticism i'd say that the backing track is a little too loud, sometimes it sorta overpowers your voice

[Calum0812]

i really enjoyed it. your voice and the slow tempo reminds me of josef salvat who's one of my faves. gd work!!

if i was to give any constructive criticism i'd say that the backing track is a little too loud, sometimes it sorta overpowers your voice

Took the words out of my mouth.

The slow and relaxed voice is perfect for the slow beat! Top work!

[Aiden]

The bits of your voice I should hear were good! The music is a bit too loud... that might just be me.

[!x!dude!x!2]

I love it hope i can hear more

[Judas]

i really enjoyed it. your voice and the slow tempo reminds me of josef salvat who's one of my faves. gd work!!

if i was to give any constructive criticism i'd say that the backing track is a little too loud, sometimes it sorta overpowers your voice

Took the words out of my mouth.

The slow and relaxed voice is perfect for the slow beat! Top work!

The bits of your voice I should hear were good! The music is a bit too loud... that might just be me.

Thanks guys, yeah I know about the vocal mixing. That's the thing that mostly needs work, this is just a rough demo I hope you guys enjoyed it, thanks for the comments

@cameron I don't know who that is but I will definitely check him out, thank you b! xx

I love it hope i can hear more

Thanks so much I will post the final version once it's done then!

(PS I would rep all of you but I'm not allowed to at the moment lol. I will do it once my powers are returned to me)