It was all about her wasn't it!

[.Lynn]

Ohk. I would edit but I can't, I would of added it though .

I dont follow you..did you read my edit?

[Addie]

I dont follow you..did you read my edit?

Yes.

[.Lynn]

Well then after you read my comments maybe you should edit your story a bit, huh?

[Addie]

Well then after you read my comments maybe you should edit your story a bit, huh?

It wont let me edit. But later on Chapter Three Ill use paragraphs and all that.

[SHEEPY]

It wont let me edit. But later on Chapter Three Ill use paragraphs and all that.

I thought that was common sense when writing a story?

[.Lynn]

It wont let me edit. But later on Chapter Three Ill use paragraphs and all that.

You dont need the option to edit to edit your story :eusa_wall

[Addie]

I thought that was common sense when writing a story?

Not every story.

I don't get you Lynn :S

[.Lynn]

Not every story.

I don't get you Lynn :S

:eusa_wall

Just copy your story and re-write it then post it again.

[Addie]

Chapter Two-

I fell asleep right away when I got home, it was still afternoon though. I was in a deep dream when I was awoken by Jessica. "What do you want?" I murmmered. " I was wondering if you wanted to come shopping with me today?" Jessica said happily. "Nah, I dont really feel like shopping I feel sort of sick" I said. "Okay, suit yourself", Jessica said walking out of my room. I thought why did she even ask? I fell back to sleep a few minutes after she left.
I got up at about five pm. I put a video on off when I was six. I saw that I was getting alot of attention from my mum and dad. I wonder why that all changed. I forwarded the tape. Nothing intresting, so I turned it off and put my favorite film on ''The Hot Chick'' I love that film. So I crawled into my bed and watched it. Then my best friend April came in. ''Hey!,Whats up?'' She said. ''Hi.Nothing too much.'' I replied. ''Are you comming out today?'' April asked. ''Nah. We'll see whos on MSN.'' I replied. ''Yea, Ok.'' April said. I got up and got my wireless laptop of my desk. April took her trainers off and sat on my bed. Only Cody and Ellie were on. We talked to them for ages. Until April said ''Better go. Getting too late.'' ''Bye.'' I said. ''Bye'' she said walking out.

Chapter Three- Today


There x]

[.Lynn]

Lmao..you were supposed to write your own thingy. Mine was just an example. Also you were supposed to do the whole story with more detail not just the first part.