A good read.
You could work on paragraphing though.
+Rep.
~ Misawa
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Thread: A Window Of Happiness
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06-09-2006, 03:49 PM #12
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Yeah, I didn't want it to look like a massive post as it puts people off!
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your stories are so amazing
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10-09-2006, 09:37 AM #14
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Real nice 10/10 =]
I don't want your freedom
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16-09-2006, 10:20 PM #15
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