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  1. #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by PaulMacC View Post
    *stealz*

    Only messing, very good.
    If anyones gonna steal it its gonna be me... lol Im doing the same coursework as him lol. Lol James in about a week I need to do one of those . Oh and erm... its not very detailed, and you skipped the movie parts to hastily. Sorry... hope you can edit in time for Mondaii or whatever.
    Last edited by ItsDave; 02-11-2007 at 09:50 PM.

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    you know they google the first few lines or w/e so you could get done for plagarism by posting it here tbh but idk.

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    Googled the first few lines and found this:

    http://boardreader.com/tp/Plane+One.html

    hmmm...

    drink up this bottle of yeah
    and P A I N T your body on me


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    decent better so far than any of my corse work


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    wow, very good.
    I like it

    "One grabbed me and through me." should be threw .

    Erm, "steering sticks", change it to throttle, or sterring wheel or something.

    very good though (Y)

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    lol i didnt actually have enough time to change it at all before i had to hand it in (tuesday) and i am very happy to announce i got a B for it by my enlighs teacher so thats 2 pieces of coursework out of 5 and two B's YAY
    Joined Habbox for the first time on the 29-10-2005 // Joined Habbox for the second time on the 08-10-2006 // Joined Habbox for the third time on the 30-09-2007 // Became a Habbox Writer on the 26-11-2007 // Became a Senior Habbox Writer on the 07-02-2008 // Left Habbox 01-07-2008 // Came back to habbox on 23-08-2008 // Became a Writer again on the 27-08-2008 // Became a Trialist Content Designer on the 22-09-08 // Left Habbox on the 30-09-08

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    We did that a couple of weeks ago, I got a B. Anyway, yours is awesome!

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    Good story.
    I think it's a good peice of writing, however I don't think the vocabulary was great.

    And yeah, I'd say a B is about right.
    Well Done.
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    I liked it.

    Well done.
    [:

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    I thought it was good, maybe a little more description... to add a bit more panic would really liven it up and make the reader feel like they're there, but besides from that, it's a good piece of work!

    well done

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