Make The Change (Poem)

[Laggings]

GO ON:
www.associatedcontent.com
AND PUBLISH YOUR POEMS
FOR CASH

>:L

[Captainace$]

I don't want cash and I don't publish them on sites such as that.

[Laggings]

AC is a really good site tbh...

[Misawa]

They're not bad. Written quite sloppily and they're somewhat naive. You need to work on your grammar. Keep on writing.

[sLaggings]

I think he gets bullied irl because most are about bullys, but I deal with the same thing so I know how it feels.

[Blinger1]

The horse one is weird :S

[Captainace$]

I go horseriding, I've written it how I feel when I ride. If you think about it, When you do something you feel safe with and like, You feel as though no one can hurt you in that time. Grammer is not as important as getting your message through. I've got more poems not about bullies then I do that are about bullies, however, I do write the ones about bullies for the reason of to get others to understand what people who have or are being bullied are going through. Here are three more of mine poems, Thanks for commenting and keep the comments coming. =)

Autumn and Halloween
Trees with golden leaves sway too and fro
Harsh breeze encourages each leaf to fall silently to the earth below
Autumn is a season for trick or treating, perhaps carve a face into a pumpkin or two
Out in the streets, halloweeners create a perfect halloween night view
Tall old looking trees stand swaying in the breeze row by row
On the dim lit streets a loud sound emits into the still air, its only a crow
Leaves upon leaves pile up into great heaps
In which during the day time, the children run at the leaf piles, taking great leaps
Lanterns hang onto twisted branches belonging to the trees
swinging back and forth, shadows casting in rows of threes
Out in the dark and erie night
There will be a halloween sight


Spooky Forest
In a damp erie forest where tall trees stand
Row by row on a deserted land
Even on a warm summers day
The forest remains in a spooky way
Echoes of crows flapping are emitted into the still air
Twisted Branches move in the rythem of a strange cool breeze, leafless and bare
The spooky forest is a haven for many creatures both large and small
Listen hard, you may hear rustling or even an eagle call
Nocturnal creatures can also be heard, some hiding in the forest green
From fox's to hares, owls and bats all creating a magical scene
The spooky forest is a mystery and shall always remain as the creatures home
Where many animals lurk and are free to roam


An animals plea
You see this now a written plea
As an animal humans hurt me
I have a thinking mind like you
Feeling pain until the day is through
Look into my eyes, You will see the fear
I know now soon my end is near
Battered body, strong will
Broken ribs, i'm going still
Please listen, this is from the heart
Rescue me, give me a better start
All i've ever wanted is to be a friend
I beg you now, make this pain end

[sLaggings]

Still amazing

[kuzkasate]

Those are quite good! Not everyone has a talent in writing poems, im amazing at English, best in my year but I can NOT do poems AT ALL.
You definatley shouldnt leave your skills just like that!
With abit of work, you could even go really far

[AgnesIO]

Those are quite good! Not everyone has a talent in writing poems, im amazing at English, best in my year but I can NOT do poems AT ALL.
You definatley shouldnt leave your skills just like that!
With abit of work, you could even go really far

You certainly think you are good..