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    Smile My Poems

    One of my many poems, Enjoy.

    Fires of destruction, Buildings ablaze
    People on street corners, wasting away their days
    Bullies in the playground, picking on a kid
    People beating others, just to steal a few quid

    Neighbours checking in, helping each other out
    Charities showing teamwork, thats what its all about
    Friends chatting merrily, in the mornings sun
    People saying sorry, knowing whats done is done

    Only we can change the world, Unite us all once more
    Make it a friendly place, where at night you can go out of the door
    Stop the fighting, Stop the hate
    Make that change, Instead of thinking it can wait


    Another poem by me, Comments are welcome

    Night time shadows creep across the floor towards your bed
    Imagination working on overdrive, your eyes open wide watching the shadows with dread
    Greenary in the shape of trees outside your window move their twisted braches tapping against the glass
    Heart beats faster, you grip the covers until your knuckles turn white wanting night time to pass
    Time ticks slowly by, fear grips you more, you shiver in fear
    Many sounds are emitting now, you close your eyes tightly not wanting to know what lurks near
    And when you do open your eyes, you see a black cloaked figure hover over you
    Rearing up ontop of a horse, indeed the headless horseman has visited, your mind races wondering what to do
    Even when you hide under your bed covers, the sounds still emit, the floorboards creaks and you scream in fright
    Some hours later you awake to find that your covered in sweat, you now know that a nightmare had visited you that night

    Another poem of mine, Enjoy reading it and comments are welcome.

    Every harsh word that a bully speaks
    Runs through my mind for years and weeks
    I can never forget them nor ignore
    Alone in this never ending war
    Around every corner through every door
    The bullies stand there haunting me more
    I sheild myself as best as I can
    Out of breath as I ran
    Wanting this nightmare to end
    Only wishing to be a friend
    Not a target nor a foe
    Not wanting no one to hurt me anymore

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    Last edited by Laurensh1; 03-11-2009 at 04:46 PM.

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    I'm here for you man. I feel what you're saying.

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    Its good but could I suggest changing;

    Quote Originally Posted by CapAce View Post
    Not a target nor a foe
    Not wanting no one to hurt me anymore
    to

    Quote Originally Posted by CapAce View Post
    Not a target nor a foe
    Not wanting no one to hurt me no mo

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    Thanks for your comments, I think I'll keep this poem as it is. The only reason for not changing it is because this is one of my oldest poems and I like to compare my old poems to my newer ones to see how much i've improved.

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    no mo

    LOLLLLLLLLLL love that techno

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    Another three poems of mine, enjoy and comments are welcome

    The old lighthouse
    From the mainland an old lighthouse can be seen
    Surrounding it are the seaweed covered rocks
    The sea air is fresh, calming and clean
    Boats bob about in the docks

    The paintwork of the lighthouse is faded and pealing with age
    Two of the windows in it are green with moss
    Yet the lighthouse still stands when the waves lash out in rage
    When the lighting flashes and thunder sounds as if its feeling cross

    The lighthouse's oil lamp still remains as it was all thoose years ago
    If you lit the lamp it would spark into life once more
    In your mind you can see its strong beams across the sea it would glow
    The best views of this old lighthouse can be seen from the shore


    Across The Poppy Field
    Across the poppy field as far as the eye can see
    Thousands of red poppies upon the earth grow
    The brave spirited soilders of the war from pain they are free
    As wooden crosses stand row by row

    We remember the great who fought the foes until the end
    With wreaths of poppies in which we put onto the ground
    Respect them, remember them, For a moment we spend
    In silence without a sound

    The soilders of the wars may in peace they rest
    Forever and always, in a field which poppies sway too and fro
    From the heroes to the great and onto the best
    Across the poppy field the wooden crosses stand upright in the spring breeze, row by row


    Sunrise
    Midnight sky turns slowly light
    Casting across the earth a golden glow
    Awaken all to see the sight
    Its the dawns chorus we all know

    Sharp fast chirps emit to one and all
    Hoping to wake them from their deep slumber
    Flowing rivers, Animals great and small
    Move around in a large number

    Sun rises up in the everchanging sky
    Showing a new day has been born
    People awake, birds fly high
    The sun beams both light and warm

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    You should write a poem book pls.

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    Trying to get your poems into a book is hard. I've emailed publishers and agents but none are wanting to take me on.
    Last edited by Captainace$; 06-11-2009 at 06:28 PM.

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    start writing the poems on associatedcontent and make a little money that way + get known.

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    On A Horse
    On a horse I will gallop free
    Where bullies cannot hurt me
    On a horse I will be strong
    All the bullies words are wrong

    On a horse I will grin
    The bullies will not win
    On a horse I will smile
    As the bullies wait a while

    On a horse I will fight
    Until the bullies move out of sight
    On a horse I will cheer
    As the bullies are no longer near


    Imagine
    In the darkness of the night
    Shadows lurk in the moon light
    Loud short hoots can be heard
    Now you see its only an owl, a bird

    Creaking sounds you can hear
    Are slowly sounding very near
    You imagine the worst in your head
    Its only the old floorboards under your bed

    A claw like shadow you shall see
    Its not that spooky, its only a tree
    You imagine all these sights
    To become spooky giving you a fright

    In the darkness of the night
    Shadows lurk in the moon light
    Your imagination works on over drive
    Where these fearfull images thrive


    Thin Old Horse
    I am a thin old horse
    In a dirty stable I sleep
    Life was not always like this of course
    They had always said I was to keep

    The water I now drink
    Is from a pipe that leaks
    Now I can only blink
    As I long to speak

    I wish to ask for food
    Or even for a little love
    I am now so frail and cold
    Giving my water bucket a little shove

    A passer by notices me
    And feeds me a carrot or two
    I am now let free
    Into a feild thats new

    I am loved and cared for
    Eating apples and hay
    I want to ask my owner once more
    Why did you leave me that day



    Another three poems by me, enjoy

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