Reuploading My gallery v1

[myke]

I said in previous threads of the same thing what I like, what's the point repeating them when he doesn't take proper criticism in to heart if you do. You have to be cruel to be kind, and that's a fact. I mean look at Simon Cowell. And my English teacher is horrid in class but it really helps.

Yeah but you're not Simon Cowell... and this is on a different level totally, I see no industry and I believe that he is in the younger range of the forum, constructive criticism is positive too, not just negative.

[lRhyss]

Tbh I think there really quite good yes lacking in shading but good but I cant really talk anymore

[AppleChapstick.]

What's the point in posting things you posted like 2 weeks ago, seriously? Especially when you don't bother to improve on them as the ones I commented on look exactly the same like no shading in the hair on the bottom right person. I've drawn a diagram to deal with some errors:

What you should do in future is set a pretend light source to help with shading, it made alot of my alts better when I was good.

Oh by the way, there are alot more but they're either minor or I cba to address them. Also I didn't bother with the emotics.

That actually looks really helpful, i can see why he would take it badly but he shouldn't. If nobody ever said anything critically then nothing would ever get better. I would be more than happy to receive constructive criticism from you.