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    POST MOOOOOOORE!

    I love the usage of "10 minutes till destruction" it really gets your nerves going xP

    +Rep for this story, it's great!

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    ^_^ Heres Chapter 3 guyyys. :-)

    Enjoy.


    3 Minutes till destruction



    I slumped further down in my seat, showing off my hips. Hoping that Sam would be able to see them. He probally thinks I look like a right loon.

    Emma was still asleep, jeez. She is so boring sometimes, but I still love her. I actually was SO bored I decided to make loud noises to make her wake-up.
    I coughed. Didn't work.
    I burped. Didn't work.
    I even tried to let gas out of my own bottom, but it didn't work.

    Oh my god, is she dead? I lent over her face to hear whether she was breathing.

    "What are you doing?" asked Sam.

    I jolted straight back up, Damn it.

    "Errr, Ermm..."

    1 Minute till Destruction

    "I'm seeing whether shes still alive"

    "....Why?" he asked. I could tell he was trying not to laugh.

    "Errrr... Because I tried loads of things to wake her up so I thought she'd died.." I said.

    "Is she a heavy sleeper?" Sam asked.

    "MmYeah" I replied.

    We both exchanged glances for a second, and laughed.. Until that moment was broken by a large THUD.

    "WHAT WAS THAT?" I screamed.

    No one answered. My heart was racing immensly, I was looking around and peering out of the windows, I couldn't see anything.

    Until I heard the bus-drivers voice,

    'Boys and Girls, we have encountered a severe problem and we must evacuate the bus'

    The bus came to a harsh holt. Once it did, everyone was screaming and trying to take off their belts.

    A massive que had formed down the aisle, Emma had woken up.. I wish she hadn't woken up to this..

    I grabbed her hand and pulled her through the que, I saw a few people break free from the bus;

    We were in the middle of the que, pushing past people; We were actually quite near to be exact, something jolted my elbow and I fell to the ground hard. My legs ached, I couldn't stand up. Emma got down on the floor with me and we scrambled between peoples legs.

    "QUICK!" the Bus-Driver shouted.

    "WHATS GOING ON?!" screamed a girl at the front.

    There was silence for a second until the Bus-Driver shouted,

    "THERE IS A BOMB ON THE BUS"


    ;-) Chapter 4 coming tomorrow!

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    Get off the bus you fools! Lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lindzi
    Get off the bus you fools! Lol
    Read Up. V good 100/100 I cant wait for Chapter 4

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    Lmao, ;-) I'll insert that tonight. ^^

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