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    Default Do they know we are gone?

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    Plot: A Year 11 class from Saint Gerners High School, go on a school trip for the day. However, half way there something goes extremely wrong. Somone had planted a bomb on the bus, they were small bombs that were placed in different places; some at the back, some in the middle and front. Only 15 of the students survive.. But whom are they? And what do they do.. next.. who knows? ^^

    Rating: PG13+ Which is the equivilent to a 12A.

    Warning: This story may contain very mild drug references, aswell as swearing. I warned you; if you are offended by anything in this story then I suggest you are responsible for it, as you are the one whom chose to read it.

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    Do they know we are gone?
    By Yazmin S. :-)

    Chapter One - Happiness.


    The day was blooming into an awesome colour of orange and yellow, as the beautiful hot ball of Sun aroze. It shone on my cold pale face as I approached the bus that was parked outside my school.

    I dazed up at the sign, the same sign I see everday, 'Saint Gerdens High School'.

    Saint Gerdens was an extremely posh school. The uniform code wasn't strict at all, however it had the reputation of Harvards.

    I reached the bus, which had its engines turned on. I saw my stupid teacher, whom I must say had very ODD fashion sense. (She dresses like a german dancer).

    "Justine!" she shouted, I looked side to side, pretending she hadn't said my name.
    "JUSTINE RICHARDS!" she shouted louder. Oh god, this was so embaressing. I walked over to her, covering my head.

    "Yes..Miss?" I asked.

    "WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU WEARING!?"

    I was just about to reply, when suddenly my friend - Emma. Came round the corner, she butted in cheekily.

    "Its called 'Goth'" she said sternly.

    Emma grabbed my arm and hauled me onto the bus.

    I wish I never did get on that bus, not ever..

    (Chapter 2 yet to come; I have to go out >.> And I can't copy and paste the story because it won't let you.. so I will add it soon)

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    Nice start 3.
    The different colours confuse me though..
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    Argh, I get that all the time "Why are you goth?" "Why don't you be a chav?" "GOTH!!1" "Siddle is a gogh" etc...

    *sigh* I guess I'll get used to it, I supose....

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    Yeah; ^^ I used that sterotypical format in the story.. i'll add the next chapter tomorrow. ^^

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    Thats a really good first chapter I love the way it says "I wish I never did get on that bus, not ever.." Sounds great

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    ^^ Ok, i'm adding the Chapter 2 thingy. :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yazamiinx
    Summary:

    Plot: A Year 11 class from Saint Gerners High School, go on a school trip for the day. However, half way there something goes extremely wrong. Somone had planted a bomb on the bus, they were small bombs that were placed in different places; some at the back, some in the middle and front. Only 15 of the students survive.. But whom are they? And what do they do.. next.. who knows? ^^

    Rating: PG13+ Which is the equivilent to a 12A.

    Warning: This story may contain very mild drug references, aswell as swearing. I warned you; if you are offended by anything in this story then I suggest you are responsible for it, as you are the one whom chose to read it.

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    Do they know we are gone?
    By Yazmin S. :-)

    Chapter One - Happiness.


    The day was blooming into an awesome colour of orange and yellow, as the beautiful hot ball of Sun aroze. It shone on my cold pale face as I approached the bus that was parked outside my school.

    I dazed up at the sign, the same sign I see everday, 'Saint Gerdens High School'.

    Saint Gerdens was an extremely posh school. The uniform code wasn't strict at all, however it had the reputation of Harvards.

    I reached the bus, which had its engines turned on. I saw my stupid teacher, whom I must say had very ODD fashion sense. (She dresses like a german dancer).

    "Justine!" she shouted, I looked side to side, pretending she hadn't said my name.
    "JUSTINE RICHARDS!" she shouted louder. Oh god, this was so embaressing. I walked over to her, covering my head.

    "Yes..Miss?" I asked.

    "WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU WEARING!?"

    I was just about to reply, when suddenly my friend - Emma. Came round the corner, she butted in cheekily.

    "Its called 'Goth'" she said sternly.

    Emma grabbed my arm and hauled me onto the bus.

    I wish I never did get on that bus, not ever..

    (Chapter 2 yet to come; I have to go out >.> And I can't copy and paste the story because it won't let you.. so I will add it soon)


    Chapter TWO

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    Me and Emma sat ourselves on the dusty seats on the coach. It was an old grotty coach with a fairly odd looking bus driver. As always.

    "Lovely day.." I said, trying to create some kind of communication between us.

    "Mmyeah" Emma mumbled,

    I knew something was wrong but I couldn't bring myself to ask. I jerked my head up as a strong scent of tacky perfume brushed across my nostrels. I saw the school's 'popular girl' Lindsay. She looked at my horridly,

    "Oh, is it me? Or did it just get strangly UNPOPULAR IN HERE" she said in stupid so called 'American' accent.

    I crossed my arms and stared at her furiously. She carried on walking to the back with her, 'cool mates' and .. of course the most handsomist man I had ever laid my eyes upon - Sam.

    Sam was Lindsays hearthrob. He was tall, dark and mysterious. And thats what I love about him. His hair was so neatly styled and sexy; all I wanted to do is run my smooth fingers through it. However, that could never come true.. Apparently, Sam has an awful secret that only Lindsay knows, and she bribed him to be her boyfriend; otherwise, she would tell everyone.

    "Hey Sam" I said dreamily, he looked down at my and smiled. OH GOD! He SMILED AT ME. I enjoyed our short breifing until a harsh grasp of Lindsays perfect hands grabbed Sam's hoodie sleave. I scowled at her, but she did not see.

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    30 Minutes into the journey.
    23 Minutes until destruction.

    I twiddled my thumbs nervously. I had never been car-sick before, until now. And Lindsay and her stupid crew at the back didn't help. She had taken off her heeled shoe and was throwing it at me. I was hoping Emma could atleast stand up for me, but she was asleep.

    "WILL YOU QUIT IT!" I shouted, turning my body around so I faced Lindsay.
    "Oh, i'm sorry honey" Lindsay said sarcastically, she picked up her shoe and threw it at me again. Accept THIS time I caught it, and threw it back.
    It missed. I slumped back in my seat, knowing I must have looked like a total prat trying to inflict damage on Lindsay.

    10 Minutes till destruction.

    WOW. WOW, AND WOW! Sam had came and sat next to me on the opposite aisle. I MEAN WOW! He's not talking to me, but I can feel him looking at me when I look out the window.
    Man, he is so hot.. Why couldn't I have someone like him.. Lindsay doesn't deserve him. He's way too cool and nice for her.

    Maybe I might get a chance with him..? Only time can tell..

    [Chapter 3 added soon]

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    Unlucky, my boyfriend has black styled hair (on his HEAD!) that I CAN run my fingers through XD

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    LaLaLa 1000/1000 But id liek to read more And rep btw

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    Can't wait for chapter 3! Great so far! 10/10!

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