Club I think. *WIP?*

[Revis]

No, I expermented with the people, it doesn't work. Lol, rating? Oh and ocngrats Wayne. on becoming a Forum Moderator.

Nuhuh, i've made people work on that scale before, I just can't remember the pixels. It might of been 6x2 or 10x2 or something *shrugs*
Erm, the boat is on the wrong scale, it's far too small.

[Robzor]

> thats very nice do mini men walking by lol

[ItsDave]

Ok, I owe Revis an opoligy. I can do small people.

Own comment:Ok first off I love the way the Helicopter shadow come out, and the people, I really dont like the billboard shadow. Its messed up which Ill fix soon.

[Wayne]

Great additions, especially the billboard, and the people. Well done.

[ItsDave]

Thank you.

[Art]

Awesome. BUT. Yes but . Ugh billboard shadow shouldnt be on sky :s and uh... helicopter ... spin things... should be like in a moving motion, at the moment it looks like its about to plumet into the ocean.

[Disaronno]

I think its good, but i meant for the billboard to be on the right hand side wall? Anyway its your chioce where you put it. Nice Men/Women Btw!

[chubbzilla]

well done 10/10

[Ekalb]

Awesome. BUT. Yes but . Ugh billboard shadow shouldnt be on sky :s and uh... helicopter ... spin things... should be like in a moving motion, at the moment it looks like its about to plumet into the ocean.

Its a still picture.
When you do an object and have its 3 face edges why are they black? Make them a lighter colour than all the main colour of the object.
When you have an object and have its 3 face edges why is there shading around the black lines? There is no reason for that at all
You put a shadow around everything
A darker line around every single thing in the alt - they are also completeley uneccessary.
The shading on the grass through the pillars holding up the bilbaord - Why is it like that? It should be on the ground around where the pillar stands not through it.
Nothing in the world would make the bilboard shadow go to the left and in the air. That needs to be fixed.
There is a green shadow around the orange boat that should be blue.
That is all from me now. There are still many more things to fix.
You put shading in too many places, in the wrong places and in unneccessary places.
And also one thing I noticed - Your light coming from things should be more like the light from lamps on habbo.
I wont rate it. Ill just give you one word.
poor

[Nick.]

Its a still picture.
When you do an object and have its 3 face edges why are they black? Make them a lighter colour than all the main colour of the object.
When you have an object and have its 3 face edges why is there shading around the black lines? There is no reason for that at all
You put a shadow around everything
A darker line around every single thing in the alt - they are also completeley uneccessary.
The shading on the grass through the pillars holding up the bilbaord - Why is it like that? It should be on the ground around where the pillar stands not through it.
Nothing in the world would make the bilboard shadow go to the left and in the air. That needs to be fixed.
There is a green shadow around the orange boat that should be blue.
That is all from me now. There are still many more things to fix.
You put shading in too many places, in the wrong places and in unneccessary places.
And also one thing I noticed - Your light coming from things should be more like the light from lamps on habbo.
I wont rate it. Ill just give you one word.
poor

Poor? This piece of pixel art is actually very good. There are a few minor glitches, but still, poor? I think that's a bit harsh.

9.9/10

- Nick