Hating but Loving [Child Abuse Story]

[Charizard.]

Wow, Another great story, love the emotions and thoughts. Continue it!

[-=rooty987=-]

Look, i don't want my stories turning into bloomin arguements, look, i won't carry on, just to keep the select few happy.
Infact, i shall not write these stories anymore, seeing as it is upsetting people.
Love Dan
xxx

[Jashmine]

Noo, write more I love it.

[-=rooty987=-]

I dunno if i should, some people think these stories are about my life.
Next time i'll write about a world of cheese tree's and roads made of muffins, and see if people think if that's about my life aswell :rolleyes:
Love Dan
xxx

[Jashmine]

NoNo, that's MY life...
Keep writing what you write best

[-=rooty987=-]

The sun shone over the tiny village, the cheese trees swaying the candy wind. I skipped along the muffin roads, I leant out, and took a chunk out of the cheese tree, it tasted so good.
This is the story of my life, cheese trees, muffin roads and sherbet candy wind. WOOOO.

Isn't it great ^_^

[Jashmine]

Sherbet candy wind!!!!!!!!!!!
-dies-
Im jealous I wany muffins cheese and sherbet.
What about coke? Do they have coke rivers as well?!

[-=rooty987=-]

I am glad that the people that were trying to be smart have shutup. Anyway, they have the write to post opinions, but people don't need to argue over my story.
Infact, people are trying to tell me to go get help.
Hope you 'smart' people enjoy my candy story, and as you might say 'YOU'RE 12 YOU SHOULDN'T BE WRITING ABOUT CHEESE TREES!'
Love Dan
xxx

[=Sean...]

Here's something from your profile

Location: In a world of dirt and hatrid. ....




It bothers me because you write everything in first person point of view. When someone writes it in first person, they are placing themself in the story. Try writing in third person if you want me to stop thinking that you are a demented 37 year old. You wrote about a gay love story in first person, you admitted you have kissed boys, and you have wrote a story that includes child abuse? What's next, you admit you are abused?

[-=rooty987=-]

The reason i write in first person, is because it makes the reader more interested.
When you say, i hate you, it grabs their attention. I find it easy to write in 1st person, in all my stories i write in this way.
Love Dan
xxx