English GCSE Coursework (short story)

[Andeeh]

All my other pieces, I've been given an A. I want an A* for this, and I don't think all of a sudden, someone that tells me it's ****, that got a B as well, will make any difference.

I've seen my teacher today, and he explained that the story I've written seems that it is based on the girl and what she is thinking, and it's working.

Anyway, I'm going to make her go into court. She has been raped, and she stabbed the rapist. She is scared about getting sent down for stabbing the rapist, as well as the fact she thinks they could think she's lieing about rape.

I'll try and make more speech in this next bit, and it should flow more.

Im happy with a B though, it was just a suggestion maybe going back to the drawing board don't need to bite my head off.

[Black_Apalachi]

Like don't stab me or whatever, but I don't think posting your coursework on the net was too bright. Just saying this because I did English Language A-Level but when I showed my story to my teacher, she actually refused to believe it was my own work. Basically if I'd posted mine here, I might have been ******. If any questions are asked about your work and then it's found on the internet (i.e. here), you might not be able to prove sufficiently that it was you who posted it which could get you into trouble.