My Latest Hotel | x |

[Kronics]

It's a working progress i'd say

[Tintinnabulate]

I likee it Slowly add some more detail like the Habbo ones and it will be stunning.

[Nemo]

Like i said in the other thread, try and add more details like a balcony or windows, and perhaps create a unique background too?

[rokgal]

The windows are way too much, why don't you do a few on each side. I believe you copied and pasted the windows over and over and didn't really look if they were straigth Charlotte. They are quite rushed I do admit.

Also, the pillars holding up the hotel are uneven, if you look at each end they are different sizes away if you get me.

It would look better lighter at the top like Mr. Selena Gomez said.

Also another colour would be really good as if you had that in real life you would have flys and ladybirds on it a lot in summer.

Also the windows are tremendously small, maybe expand on them a bit, make them a bit bigger and less of them.

I think that when the corner point comes you could like do a glass escalator type thing? so you can actually get upto the top level, unless you put an helicopter pad on top.

And what is it meant to be? Office buildings? Flats? Flats would be good if you added balconies too and maybe incorporate plants on the balconies.

Anyhow Charlotte you have really improved from your first design however, I really like your version two on the other thread better.

But I hope you will take my ideas into consideration!

i know btw it was rushed then i did copie the windows cos when i firast posted it i realised i for got all the windows so lol yh and gibs thanks for the help stuff but i cant shade anything lol but ill try