TooClose Tunes - Ends 10th February

[micky.blue.eyes]

i know it isnt very good but maybe you like it

Although our love is over, it remains
An unfrequented garden in my heart,
Its beauty quite inseparable from pain,
A wilderness where once was willful art.
I hope a little piece of you is still
Reserved for me, a place you may not go,
But where my room, untenanted, can fill
A moment with my music, sweet and slow.

There are no wishes like a former lover's
That from the dark, repentant night must shine.
And so though we have both moved on to others,
I send you from afar this Valentine.

[Hanurr]

I know this is lame. It sounds like a little kid wrote it, but it means quite a lot, underneath the words..

My Poem.

:eusa_booh He is the only one for me;
It is plain for all to see.
This is true love, it's meant to be
Finally our real feelings, can be freed.

The song of the heart
How could we ever have been apart?
The golden arrow, has struck and provided light
It feels so real, and so right.

Now as I think, I wonder why,
I wasted all that time, hiding to cry;
You are always there for me, no matter what
I never knew that you cared about me such a lot.

You completed my life,
Emptied my heart of strife,
And now, there is one thing I must say.

I love you, and I always have,
Even though I can't have you,
I dream about what it would be like to do,
all the things she and you enjoy.

So now you know,
I love you so
I hope you realise what this poem means;
I can't bear another day being with you, only in my dreams... :eusa_booh

This is a real poem, and I hope that the person who this is directed at reads this and realises what they mean to me.
Thanks.

[Hmfc-Boi]

Big : D : without spaces

Poem:
My Name Is Hmfc-Boi
I Would just Like A Toy
Cos' im Quite frankly A Boy
i have a Friend name Leroy
and he gave me toy
so now im one happy boy

[Gazahu]

Habbo Name: Gazahu
Poem: Needs

You don't need fancy jewelry
To make me fall for you.
You don't need a lot of makeup,
To cause me to pursue.

You don't need clothes from Gucci
To make me like you more.
You do not need to put on airs
To make my passions soar.

All you need is honesty,
And a smiling face;
Sincerity and loyalty,
And a warm embrace.

Thanks,

.::Gazahu::.

Edited By MissAlice - Competitions Manager
YOU ARE ONLY ALLOWED ONE ENTRY - YOU ALSO HAVE ENTRY NO. 29

[E]

Habbo Name: llozl Entry: When I Think Of Love ...
I think of roses and red hearts ...
quiet walks ...
and very soft, tranquil music ...
I envision an eagle taking flight on a crisp fall morn ...
the first snowflake in the winter ...
and the sound of the first robin in the spring ...
I envision a glorious sunrise ...
a spectacular rainbow ...
and stars brightly shining on a summer night ...
But most of all, I envision you ...
your eyes radiating warmth, joy and vibrance ...
and the tender feelings in my heart
from your friendly smile.

[thedarkone04]

Habbo/Habbox name: Julia7
My poem's about smiling, so it's sort of about liking or loving some1 lol.
My poem:

Smiling is infectious,
You catch it like the flu.
When someone smiled at me today,
I started smiling too.

I passed around the corner,
And someone saw my grin.
When he smiled I realized,
I’d passed it on to him!

I thought about that smile,
Then I realized what it's worth.
A single smile just like mine,
Could travel round the Earth!

Thanks, Julia :p

I HAVE A FEELING YOU DID NOT MAKE THIS POEM YOURSELF, WE GOT IT AS AN ASSIGNMENT IN SCHOOL ITS THER ON THE NET. SORRRY FOR DOUBTING YOU.

Edited By MissAlice - Competitions Manager
When in the competition forum only post competition entries - Do not post questions or comments it is not the place to do so.

[Kroziun]

Every February 14th, across the habbo hotels, flowers, and gifts are exchanged between loved ones, all in the name of St. Valentine. Can you write a piece of poetry to mark this special day?, it doesn't have to be about a loved one, it could well be about a piece of furni you love

As some of you know, I am one of the "older" habbos on the Hotel, and so have the benefit of experience. Drawing on that I have just placed together these words that are currently on my heart, as I know there are many like myself in a similar situation, and the competition did not say every entry had to be upbeat. If just one person feels moved by my words and feelings, then I'll be satisfied. Is that not what poetry is for, for with age, you can learn to speak from the heart without fear of embarrassment or ridicule? I hope everyone likes it...

Habbo Name: Kroziun
Poetry Title: Scars & Time

When at first I think true love bites
Through rose-coloured glasses I gaze
Down the widened road I have run so fast
Then take a closer peek and really look
Path overnight becomes an unfathomable maze

For answers to reasons become my quest
Infatuation becomes obsession and in turn
Possession becomes cast aside with no care
Though to one thought I cleave or cling
I know, sooner let go, though still I yearn

Time a great healer still leaves awful scars
Joyous memories turned sour keep constant pain
Valentine's Day once more I'll spend alone
Trying not to catch young lovers' eyes
Wondering if that feeling I'll ever regain

To learn from my mistakes I live in hope
Wishing even memories of good times depart
Pleading when my soulmate arrives one day
I'll not withdraw fearing hurt once more
Those scars too, fade over time from my heart

[BL!NKEY]

dont laugh but here it is

"Valenties day is fun And i like i a lot"

- BL!NKEY

[joboman]

habbo name- joboman
poem:
I love you my dear habbo
so elegant and colourful
I gave you my heart stickies
you made my tummy do a flippy
i gave you all my heart..
why did we have to part?
I wanted to die..
but i hope you find a better guy

[hellzfrost]

Habbo Name: hellzfrost
Habbox Name: hellzfrost
Entry: ove7: Love Is A Deadly Thing. ove7:

Oh how I love Valentine's Day - so tender and sweet !
A day where all lovers remember their first meet,
The sun is always shining, the sky is always blue,
And throughout the world all can be heard "I love you."

My story is an unhappy one,
But I have tell it - it has to be done!
My Valentine girl had a shine to her smile,
But little did I know she would do something vile...

Golden light shimmers through the window as I awake,
This day is mine my ,love I shall take,
To the poshest of posh diners,
With posh fancy recliners...

Her teeth were like pearls straight from the sea,
I thought her scarlet lips would be kissing me,
She betrayed and lied,
As much as I cried...

So what was this is evil crime she commited ?
Well I thought this was not permitted !
She caught sight of a "cooler" male,
Playing Rugby through a strong, strong gale...

I confronted her, my face grim,
"Who do you adore ? Me or him ?! "
She said she would choose,
And I thought to myself I cannot lose.


My aching heart was filled with sorrow,
Will she choose me !? Will I see her tomorrow !?
But all I could do was sit and wait,
To see if my dream girl would be my date...

So here ends my tale,
Because she thought I was stale,
My rivalis had won,
Venus Goddess of Love had betrayed me,
Because in my heart it felt like it had been stung by the Queen bee..

*Rivalis is Latin for Rival In Love*