''But Thats What I Want!''

[Addie]

Keely Teslo wasn't a popular girl. She was 14, But didn't have alot of friends. No one talked to her. And they made fun of her because she wanted to be a singer. She entered singing competitions and won 3rd or 2nd place. All she did after school and on weekends were sing, draw or listen to music on her computer. One day at school the popular girl Terri came to her whilst Keely was at her locker and said ''You have no chance of wining the School Singing Competition. It will be me!'' ''Ill kick your butt this year!'' Keely said to her. ''In your dreams Teslo'' Terri said and walked off. After school she went home and practised her favorite song ''Walking On Sunshine''. The next week she entered the singing competition and had a lot of applause's. She even won 1st Place! Terri went over to her at the end and said ''I let you win'' ''Whatever!'' Keely said. Keely went over to her mom and dad who were watching her and they went home. Keely put her big trophy in her room and went to bed. The next day there was a new kid at school. His name was Ricky. He banged into Keely when she was walking and he helped her pick up her books. Keely and Ricky ended up being friends. After a month Ricky told her that He always wanted to become a actor but people made fun of him. Then Keely told him that she wanted to be a singer and people made fun of her.

Chapter2- Tonight or Tommorow.

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[Isaac]

You have a making of a good story here, keep it up.