Moving On

[Bodice]

Alot of my friends in real life have had to have the courage to move on. I wrote this poem today in school when we had a free lesson. Hope you like it. :p

They had been together for many a year
Now all she can feel is fear.
She gave all that she could give
It just wasn't the way he wanted to live.

He left without a backward glance
Not even giving their love a second chance.
She often wonders what she could have done
To keep him from going on the run.

Now she is living all alone
With nothing she can call her own.
She can barely make herself eat
Wondering if her life will ever again be complete.

Slowly but surely she is now moving along
Building her courage and becoming strong.
It will take time to heal her broken pride
Toward the sunrise her heart will glide.

[Bodice]

I would of edited but it was too late. Would you also rate this because i've just found out i can use it as a peice of homework. Thanks

[xhannx]

10/10
Loved it

[Colourful™]

Please don't double post but I will give it a 9/10. Good try.