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    This is my new story. 10 Chapters.

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    ''Lily! Your only eleven!'' My mum shouted. I wanted to go out to the high street with my best friends Emily and Amber. But my mum said anything bad could happen. ''PLEASE!'' I begged. ''NO! ITS DECEMBER TOO AND ITS DARK AFTER FOUR!'' My mum yelled. ''SO? ITS ONLY TWO!'' I yelled back. Why couldn't she understand? I have a life. But no! I'm stuck in my house all the time. My dad walked in the front door. ''What is it now?'' He asked. ''Lily wants to go to the high street with her friends.'' My mum said. ''Lily. Comon you know what happend to Tom Frank.'' My dad said. ''STOP THROWING THAT IN MY FACE!'' I yelled running up to my room. Tom Frank was only eleven at the time. He and his friends were downtown and they got kidnapped. They managed to escape but they could of died. But I'm diffrent. That was five years ago. And unlike some I carry pepper spray. I cried into my pillow and thought ''I Should be aloud! I'm old enough. I mean Emily's cousin Rachel is aloud down and shes eleven. But no! No no no! I'm not.'' Then Amber called. ''OH MY GOD! LILY!'' Amber said. ''What?'' I asked. ''I'm so not aloud downtown! After what happend to stupid Tom Frank!'' Amber said. ''I know! So what I mean, He was stupid. He didn't try to get away and he still goes down. What could go wrong.'' I said. ''Emily is away with Rachel, Sammy and Ross.'' Amber said. ''Yea? Well I'm going. Bye'' I said. ''Bye.'' Amber said. I hung up and went downstairs for my dinner. I had chicken and chips. I didn't speak to mum or dad until mum said ''Look, Lil, We only care about you. We don't want you hurt or killed.'' ''But. Mum, Its just not fair! I mean. Emily and Rachel is aloud'' I said. ''Well, Their mums are diffrent'' Dad interupted. When I had finished I just went for a nap. Then I woke up. I went downstairs. Only six o'clock. So I watched some television.


    Chapter 2- Tommorow. [Maybe tonight]

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    Thats really good, MORE.

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    Sorry I didn't do Chapter 2 yestardy I wasn't on computer and went to my bed early because I was tired.

    Chapter 2-

    Then my mum and dad came in. ''Lily?'' My mum said. ''What?'' I asked still looking at the television. ''We have decided that you can go down the high street,'' Mum started saying. ''YEY!'' I said with a smile. ''BUT! Your big cousin Abbey has to come.'' My mum finished. ''At least its not Muriel'' I said. I hated Muriel. She was seventeen and always went on about space. She hated me too. But I loved Abbey. Abbey was fifteen and let me buy anything and talked about boys and all that. Even though my mum and dad were kind off worried I said I'd be fine. So on Saturday Abbey came to get me, Amber and Emily. I had £250 and my mobile. ''Now! If anything bad happens call here!'' Mum and Dad said. ''Yea, Yea!'' I said walking out. As we arrivied downtown Abbey took us to a shoe shop. I bought Snow boots [£10] and Pink and Light Green Converse (Not High Tops) [15]. Abbey, Emily and Amber bought a pair of boots too. After that we trodded to McDonalds. We got a big mac each and it was delicious. By now it was one o'clock. Not late we had four hours left. So we went to watch swimming. We forgot to bring our on swim suits so we sat by the pool. Then Emily got up. She was walking to the toilets when she slipped. She fell into the water.

    Dumpty DUM!. Chapter 3-
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    NOOOOOOOOOOO

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    ''EMILY! HELP! HELP!'' Amber yelled as loud as she could. You see Emily
    wasn't a strong swimmer so it was hard for her to get up. The lifegaurd jumped in and Emily was saved. ''Thank god!'' Abbey said. Then added ''I'm gonna get In deep!'' About five minutes later Emily came over. ''I..I.. I wanna go hhome..'' She stuttered. I gave her a hug and we picked up our bags and went to get a taxi. When we got in the driver asked were we wanted to go and Abbey told him. He drove us to my house and said ''Only £5.'' Abbey handed him the fiver and we rushed into my house. I told my mum and dad everything. Emily was still shaking so me and Amber took her to my room and got her into dry clothes.I walked to the top of the stairs and my mum and dad started saying to Abbey ''You shouldn't of let them at the edge!'' and ''Emily's mum and dad are going to be pretty furious.'' ''But..'' Abbey said. ''No buts!'' My mum said. ''Well, I didn't see her get up. It was slippy.'' Abbey said. Then I went into my room. Emily had tears in her eyes and Amber gave her a hug. Amber looked at the clock and said ''I have to go. My dinner will be ready soon'' ''Bye,'' I said. ''Bye.'' Amber said walking out. My mum came into my room and said ''Emily has to stay here tonight because Mr. Parker are in England visiting her sick uncle.'' ''Ok,'' I said smiling. ''They left a pair of keys here incase Emily needs anything.'' My mum then said. ''Can I go and get clothes?'' Emily asked. ''Yes.'' My mum said leaving my room. Me and Emily went downstairs and got her keys. ''GOING TO EMILY'S, BE BACK IN ABOUT FIFTEEN MINUTES!'' I shouted. Me and Emily started walking to her house when we saw Abbey. ''Abbey? What are you doing here?'' I asked. ''Oh, Wating for my mum and dad.'' She replied. Then a silver car came to the side. My Uncle Tom and Aunty Sarah. Abbey got in and they left. Me and Emily arrivied at Emily's house five minutes later. Emily opened the door and we went up to her room. She got some clothes and PJs and some magazines. Then we came downstairs and she got snacks for the midnight feast. But then she went into her garden. ''Stay here!'' She said. She went out and got something. I didn't ask but when we went out I asked ''What did you get?'' She locked the door and said ''Nothing.'' We walked to my house and I asked her again. ''Look! I'll tell you later!'' She said now looking annoyed. What did she collect? Was it a teddy? Or a joke she was going to play on me? Nope. So when we got in we went up to my room. ''Please show me what you've got.'' I begged. ''Fine!'' She said. She reached into her bag and got something.

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    She pulled out what looked like a book. ''Urm..Whats that?'' I asked. ''Its a photo album.'' She said staring at it. ''Of who?'' I asked looking confused. ''Its of me and my mum.'' She said. I could see a tear in her eye. Emily's mum died when Emily was six. She had died because of cancer. ''I went into my attic last year and got photos of me and my mum and made it into a photo album.'' Emily said. ''Well, She'll be really happy in heaven.'' I said. ''Yea, Maybe thats were she belonged.'' Emily said. Then at seven Emily said she wanted to go to sleep because she was still shakey of what happend this afternoon. When Emily went into the spare bed I went on my computer. I went on msn and talked to Cody and Amber. Then Abbey logged on. I clicked on the box and said to Abbey ''What did your parents say?'' Then she replied ''I'm not talking. I have to go. I was seeing if Mark was on'' Then she logged off. Mark was her age and she had a crush on him. I didn't have crushes on people. But Emily had a crush on Matty in our class. When my mum came through she said ''I've had a phone call from John [Emily's dad] And her uncle has got better and he'll be here in a few hours.'' ''Ok, I'll just stay on the computer, Because Emily is asleep'' I said. My mum went into the kitchen and made me something to eat. Then Matty logged onto msn. And he and Cody were in a conversation with me.

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    Then I shut down my computer and watched television. I fell asleep and when I woke up and it was morning. Emily was obviously away and I was bored. I got my breakfast and watched ''Thats So Raven'' I love that show. Then I got a phonecall. ''Hello?'' I said. ''Hey Lil'' Amber said. ''Hey Amb.'' I replied. ''Has Emily been feeling better now?'' Amber asked. ''I donno yet. Shes not here. Her dad came for her probarly ages ago.'' I said. ''When?'' Amber asked. ''About three am.'' I said. ''THREE AM!'' Amber shouted down the phone. ''Yea. Why?'' I asked. ''Well I'll tell you why! I got a little note from Emily saying, Dear Amb, Me and my father has decided to move back to England. I will miss you terribly. I hope my old friends will still be there. Love from Emily.'' Amber said. ''Oh my god!'' I said. Then the mail came. I went to get it. I had a letter adressed to me. ''I have a letter!'' I said to Amber. ''Oh my god!'' Amber said. ''Come over with your letter!'' I said hanging up. I ran upstairs and got changed. Then I went into the kitchen and on the fridge there was a note. ''Lily, Dad and I have went to ASDA's be back at three.'' It was only eleven. Then Amber came in. I showed her my letter. ''Wow, I mean. Oh my god!'' She said. ''I mean, Imagine if I moved back to Scotland!'' Amber added. ''I know.'' I said. ''I wouldn't want to. I mean, I like Wales too,'' She said. Wales is the country we live in. Emily moved here after her mum died and she had a very weird english accent. She got rid of it when she was seven though. Then the phone rang. ''Hello?'' I said picking it up. ''Hello. May I speak to Lily?'' The voice said. ''This is Lily. Who's this?'' I asked. ''Oh hello LIly. It's Emily.'' Emily said. ''Why did you leave?'' I asked putting it on speaker so Amber could hear. ''I felt I needed to go home. And my father thought it may be best.'' Emily said. ''Why have you got that accent?'' Amber butted in. ''Oh hello my dear Amber. I have went back to my fairly english accent because Its better than the Welsh one.'' Emily said. Amber looked at me with a stare. ''No it isn't. Look, Em we miss you.'' Amber said. ''I'm sorry. I have to go. The butler is here.'' Emily said hanging up. She wasn't rich. Just her uncle. ''A BUTLER! ENGLAND? ACCENT?'' I shouted. ''I know! Its shocking!'' Amber sighed. ''SHOCKING? ITS WORSE!'' I yelled. ''Well we have to get on with life!'' Amber said. ''No way!'' I said. ''Well I'm off.'' Amber said hurrying out the door. I redialed Emily's number.

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