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    Default The Life Of A Popstar - Poem

    The fans shouting my name
    Repeated again and again
    The atmosphere makes me strong
    This is were I belong

    My voice warms up the crowd
    It's wacky, it's deep, it's loud
    The music buzzing in my ear
    It's what the fans love to hear

    The popularity gains a smile
    Forever, not for a while
    The fans are here to see
    Not on my music, just on me

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    Nice poem


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    Quite good but you could improve a bit
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