My first script for my first episode of [The young ones]

[djotto1991]

Scene 1:

Mandy walks into the bar and sits down to see her old flame
Pietro Biggings at the bar.
He walks over to her

Pietro: Mandy is that you
Mandy: Why yes it is sugar
Pietro: But... You have changed so much
Mandyne can only change for the better sweet thing
Pietro:I see, I don't know if you know but I've been married to Ciara for over a year now
Mandy:I dont think i would forget you running off with that sugar mama
Pietro:Mandy why are you being like this?
Mandy:Because sugar you left me at the alter exactly 1 year ago from this date so dont talk to me about my behaviour towards you
Goodbye sugar

Scene 2:
Pietro and Ciara are eating dinner at famous Habbo
restaurant the flaming cucumber

Ciara: Oh Pietro i love you so much what a way to spend our anniversary.
Pietro:Yes it is Ciara, Guess who i bumped into yesterday
Ciara: Was it jasmine i have not spoke to that girl in years
Pietro:No it was Mandy...
Ciara: Oh no whats she doing back here... Didn't i do enough to her last time

Mandy walks into the restaurant
The wind coming in through the window makes ciars hair go frizzy without her knowing

Mandy: Well well well sugar... look what the cat dragged in
Ciara: I could say the same thing about your clothes
Mandy: Oh sugar have you looked in the mirror lately

Ciara jumps out of her seat ready to fight
Pietro pushes her back down

Pietro: Now ladies cant we just get along
Mandy: *grunts*
Ciara: *grunts*
Pietro: Now mandy what can i order you
Mandy: maybe some frizzotto
Mandy: oops i meen risotto my bad
Pietro: Now mandy
Mandy: Oh sugar u know she deserved it
Ciara: So what brings you back here
Mandy: I left a few things behind *looks at pietro*

Scene 3

Mandy is walking down the street when she gets a phone call from ciara

Ciara: Stay away from my man
Mandy: Hunni i dont know what yall talking about

Ciara is behind mandy she grabs mandy by the hair and puts her up against a wall

Ciara:I told you to stay away from my man

Scene 3

Mandy is in the gym
Pietro walks in with his freind stuart

Pietro: Mandy!
Mandy : Pietro!
Mandy: its so nice to see you
Pietro : thanks you to but whats brings you here
Mandy: no reason... you should keep an eye on that girlfreind of yours
Pietro what do yo mean i just saw her in the changing rooms

Scene 4

Mandy runs in the changing rooms

Mandy: Yo girlfrend you better get your but out here now!
*Ciara comes out of the showers*
Ciara: What do you want
Mandy: To kick your but
Ciara: Vring it on

All will be revealed next episode

1.Shall i make another episode
2.Rate out of 10

O.S dis is what i used for my application to be a crsipt writer

[djotto1991]

Soz for double posting.....

I forgot to mention dat ciara is black and mandy is white and pietro is italion soz its a vital part of stories lter to come