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    Default Not Waving But Drowning

    I think I *might* have posted this about a year ago on here. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25569086/ is where I originally posted it.

    Not Waving But Drowning

    Losing myself in your icy blues,
    Not waving...but drowning.
    Trapped between two mirrors now
    A single tear
    And the glassy reflections
    Of those eyes I so highly prize.
    The droplet falls to your face,
    But instead of flinching you remain silent.
    For a moment it looks like you are crying too
    And I smile.

    The irony is too much to bear,
    And the image of a young girl
    Burdened with a solitary teardrop is shattered.
    A cascade of tears make their way across the crumpled contours of my face.
    Sadness and beauty cannot co-exist
    Except in the realms of media and imagination.

    At last it dawns that those eyes
    Those eyes so blue, those eyes so fine
    Those eyes that I so highly prize
    Will never more gaze into mine.

    And I close your lids and lashes,
    For us, we disbelieving ones, I would burn this church,
    But for now I lay these roses on your chest,
    And leave you, for once and forever, through starless eyes.
    Try everything once, even the things you don't think you'll like.

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    Thats Really Nice And meaningful +rep
    Luv Hun-love
    I feel alive
    You were my ecstacy
    It's you that I'm craving
    I feel alive
    You were my energy
    So why do you hate me?


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    Its a great poem ;D
    blah.

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    Thank you! =)
    Try everything once, even the things you don't think you'll like.

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