Character

[eggd2]

been working on this a while

/10 c+c

[Biseinen]

1) What is it.
2) It looks odd.
3) Needs alot of work.

[eggd2]

i know, but where?

[emo...]

The fringe looks too square!

[GreenCrayons.]

It look's like theres a piece of cloth hanging onto his fridge.

[eggd2]

i hope this is better

[velvet]

Uhm, the clothes and shoes are nice, but the colours on the 'fringe' don't blend into the hair, making it look odd.

[heartQUIVER]

The clothes & shoes are looking good.

Theres alot of errors with the hair, it goes flat right across the top but goes down at the back. It's hard to explain, just work on the hair and try to get it all neat & tidy.

Um, other than that proberly 6/10

Clothes = *

[ItsDave]

What the hell is that rag hanging from his head, the clothes are very dark to consider even seeing the shading. 6/10

[chubbzilla]

ye its all right i like it