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    Default HxF Ship - Episode 1 - Daring jump

    iAlex! - Captain
    Wolverine - Co Captain?
    :.:Numark:.: - Head Stewerd
    . - Senior Steward (Father of 2)
    Nick - Thief
    Embean - Thief
    -Benji - Pirate
    Racoon - Pirate



    Chapter 1 :
    The ship rolls out of dock and into the midnight sea.BUT what people dont know is there will be a rough ride..

    Chapter 2 :
    Nick and Embean are stealing lollypops from the local Asda when they hear the sound of a ships horn.Nick runs to Embean and tells him they have to move.Nick shoves a lolly in his mouth whilst running.His granny see's him and takes the lollypop.He coulda choked!

    Chapter 3 :
    If they took a run up at the boat they might be able to get up the bridge and jump onto the back of the boat.If not... They die from the propellors.


    Possibilitys :

    Will they make the jump?
    Will their granny see them jumping with lollys?
    Will they be caught?


    Find out next time with...

    HxF Ship - Episode 2 - Around the ship
    Last edited by Frank459; 23-04-2006 at 09:28 AM.

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    Gadz, I think I soiled myself.

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    Am I alright? :s I'm very worried.

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    Chapters are a tad short methinks.

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    I just wanted an opening episode with a plot like that

    Ino its not as hawt as Jordans ;D

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    Btw you spell Daring without the e.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Adam
    Chapters are a tad short methinks.
    Ill try a tad bit more next time

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    Quote Originally Posted by iAlex!
    Btw you spell Daring without the e.
    Isn't that how he's spelt it? o_o

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    Nope you drop the 'e'

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    ;P ive editted
    Tah Alex

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